Uh read If you want to know What I personally think Makes a story better Ofc I'm going to be bashing people while also having badly structured sentences n fake words n slang so yes, let me rephrase: Read if u wanna see my trash and worthless opinion of what makes a story better in my unqualified eyes - Remember that I am not a professional and that whatever I say can be invalid if you want it to be :) Unless it's about grammar. (I may be wrong at some points but often I take info from trusted grammar sites so-)

I push myself up off the floor and begin to stumble around blindly. My body is aching, I'm covered in bruises, and I can't see anything except darkness. How long have I been here? Where's Tony? Is he looking for me? "Tony?" I whisper. My foot catches on something and I fall to the ground. "Tony!" I call. Silence. I bury my head in my hands and begin to cry. "TONY!" WARNING - This story contains themes to do with physical and sexual abuse. If this is a topic that upsets you, please do not read.

This is a story based on the song "Terrible Things," by Mayday Parade. Derek Sanders is the main character and he is the lead singer of Mayday Parade, and this is just my interpretation of the song from his point of view.