Help raise Fili and Kili with Thorin and Dis! (In Loving Memory of Thorin, Fili, and Kili) 'They say when you're dying, your life flashes before your eyes. Such as the childhood memories I am about to show you.'

The hobbit originally had a chapter where the two brothers ran into a rushing river, so here is my twist on the tale. This is my first shot at writing some criticism or comments would be nice maybe even leave a vote

A story about young Kili and older Fili. Kili is like 2 years old. And Fili is like 16 years old, yes I know I messed the ages up. I love you all! XXXX