Poetry's kind of new to me. This is my first ever poem, so let me know what you think!

No friends. No family. Nothing was virtually everything Joanna Carson knew. Homecoming. A brush with death then leaves Joanna with everything she'd ever wanted. She was no longer herself, Joanna Carson disappeared with her memory. She discovers a whole new side of life, but there's an ever-present yearning to know who she once was. But with a life that cruel and unforgiving, who would want to remember?

After witnessing the tragic death of her mother, Alexa hasn't quite been the same. On top of that, she's unwillingly moved to a small town in Montana where she meets Jay, who makes her feel more than welcome. Many strange things happen when she's around him, and it's obvious he's trying hard to cover up a shady past. She then encounters a strange boy, who gives her several warnings about Jay and his past. Who should she trust? The boy who's made her feel at home and safe? Or the one who seems to be stalking her, but his warnings seem all-too-real? For Aidan, Jay's past is too close for comfort. Jay's past is his reality. They were close, too close. And Jay betrayed him. He wasn't going to let that happen again. He wasn't going to let another innocent person suffer. Not again. Memories from his past haunt him. They dictate everything he does and everything he will do to save her. He has nothing to lose, and will stop at nothing to see her live. Problem is, his relationship with her might prove to be more than he can handle. He vowed he would never love again...but how much power does a vow hold over a person?

We had a poetry unit recently in school; here is some of the poetry that came out of it. :)