This is a work in progress and my first attempt at pure romance. Really looking for some feedback. What do you think I need to change to make it a better story? Any comments you have will be greatly appreciated.

In a remote army base, far away from any civilisation, a baby dragon is born. This dragon's name is Elron. He never new his parents, and his life is controlled by a strange devise, stuck to his head. He has no control over his actions, and has no choice to obey everything that he is told to do, but Elron has been trapped long enough. He wants out, and he is going to do everything in his power to rescue himself, even if it means death. (Disclaimer: I do not own the cover picture, all rights to original creator) (Thanks to @AdolphaSelrah for creating the cover)

Kendíka’s second chance at life begins as a nightmare. Will the eerie eyes always looking down from the sky reveal themselves? Kendíka challenges the aliens no one has ever seen to bring about a better life for the humans trapped in the surreal Regency world she wakes up in. While getting to know her alien owner, she discovers the aliens aren’t so perfect and have much to learn about humans. Will Kendíka survive or perish, attempting to make life better for the people living on Regency?

a fable story written for an English assignment

Our perfect social lives are masks to what we are hiding underneath. Our home lives may not always reflect on our social lives. A person's home life could be great, or it could be a nightmare. What a person could have going on inside could be a lot worse than you think. So whatever you do, don't judge a person by what they are showing you on the outside.

an anti war poem written for an ELA assignment