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Origins 1692 by SaydenOdor
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We all know the about hysteria that occurred in Salem, Massachusetts in the year 1692 surrounding the Salem Witch Trials, but the history books didn't cover everything. We were raised to believe that innocent people were hung to die in Salem during those times, and some of those stories are true, but not all of them. Where did the hysteria originate from, and why did it start? This is the real story of what happened in Salem, back in 1692... Stumbling across a young girl being attacked in the woods, 16-year-old Abigale makes a split decision that will forever change the life of herself and the other villagers in Salem, her decision forever putting Salem in the history books.
The Guardinals by moonforest1124
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2014 Copyright © A. M. Forest All Rights Reserved Guardinals: once a powerful title held by warriors, now a powerful title held by barbarians. After the brutal Celestial Brethren War, the Guardinals and shifters like them were banished to the realm Guardia to live the rest of their lives, away from the mortal world. With their skills no longer used for protecting, the Elders turned warriors into gladiators. One thousand mortal years later, the last Relic Dragon is on the verge of becoming a Guardinal. Her name is Apolla. Blood and glory is what she knows best. Three hundred years after mastering every battle art known to her world, she earned the mark of the Guardinal by killing every enemy she met with blue flames. That was until another Guardinal Ward was destroyed. Now with a threat of a dangerous opponent and new arrivals coming to her Ward, she is forced to do something she never knew was an option: teach. Being threatened into doing it wasn't sitting well with her, so her trusted companions dig for the truth as she does what she's told. Journey through Apolla's struggle to find herself and protect the ones she loves as she tries to uncover the truth behind her past, her present, her future and the future of those closest to her.
Princess Sebastian by SailorMiniMoon
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She is pretty. She is elegant. And she is everything a princess ought to be. If only she didn't have the awful name her parents had given her. Princess Sebastian must fight past the mythical mayhem of her world while trying to get past the struggle of having a boy's name. How can her kingdom ever perceive her to be true royalty? With a name like Sebastian, the Princess has a lot of hurtles to jump, but it's what is on the inside that counts right? She hopes so, because a dashing young prince might just steal her heart away! Cover created by: springgfield WAS RECENTLY EDITED
Beyond the Wall by SailorMiniMoon
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Towering walls surrounded her for her whole life. Princess Mona grew up as a caged bird, expected to follow in her three older sisters footsteps. Their lives were confined to the palace. Princess Mona knows, as she stares up into the sky, that there is a world beyond those walls. A world full of new and adventurous things. If only she could escape her cage and fly over that wall... Until she does. Princess Mona escapes her golden cage to discover the beautiful world isn't all she thought. People aren't as joyous and kind as she believed. Poverty had overrun a tyrant ruled nation, leaving its people scared and alone. Princess Mona discovers a world her father had kept so neatly hidden, and now she must figure out who trust. She must decide the world to which she belongs. Is she a caged bird, sitting on a golden perch, or is she flying over head with a song of hope? Cover by Lithelei Graphics
Dead-end road by Nhardi
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First I want to say I have been trying to improve the cover and I hope it likes you. I know it is not the best one but I think it is better than the Spanish version (judge you own). In this occasion I have used an online program to design it, but I still am a beginner in this sense, so I have to apologize again. Thanks in advance for understanding me. Then I have to admit that these stories are not my forte (I'm more of science fiction), but as I said in my presentation, my stories arise spontaneously or from some event in my real life, either dreams or the two. This story that I want to convey is what has emerged more recently so I decided it is the first one to see the light. You do not expect a big argument and action scenes. It is a simple love story to make contact with this world. In this English version I decided to include a cast because in this way I think the story can be more attractive. So here it goes: Cast: Joel - Hugh Jackman Beth - Emily Kinny Gwen - Emma Stone I only have three characters in the cast because only they inspired me, so the rest of the characters are available to be who you want. Finally I leave you with the presentation made by the protagonist himself. I hope you like it. PS: A hug. We read us.
The Lean and Hungry Look by MurphyChapelwood
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Myth and reality are one. Conspiracies, ancient and modern alike, manipulate every aspect of life, every interaction. Everyone lives blind to secret masters and secret dangers, but it's easy when the monsters look human, or worse, are human. In this world, in a nameless American metropolis, Uaine Dupree leads a desultory life as a penniless club promoter on the fringe of an already fringe society. When he receives a mysterious e-mail from a wealthy recluse, Uaine embarks on a nightlong odyssey of horrors, both new and old. [Formerly Wattpad Featured Paranormal Story from November 2016 until July 2017.]
Scorched by emma_scott
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Winning a position on the King's Elite Guard and riding through the sky on the back of a fierce Wyvern is all seventeen year old Gwen has ever dreamed of. When Gwen meets a mysterious criminal stealing a wyvern, she is forced to make a hasty decision that could change her life forever. In a world of tyrant kings, handsome princes and daring rebels will Gwen triumph in becoming the first woman to become an Elite Guard, or will she lose everything helping a smooth talking criminal? Cover by @Deadrot