Paranormalcy Alternate Ending/ Prequel

Warning SPOILER ALERT as this is me rewriting the ending to Endlessly of the final book in the Paranormalcy book series. Great book, not by me, duh, and I wanted to see the ending in the way I wish it had happened. Then, after I thought about it a while, I decided I should try to write a prequel to the series, as Evie...