Is any one out there who can seen through this mask?

EDITING IN PROGRESS Chihiro, now 17, isn't sure where her life is heading. Ever since her fateful encounter with the Spirit World, and a certain dragon-boy, she's yearned to return, but has never been able to do so. However. They say an act of true desperation can go a long way, so was it possibly for this reason that when Chihiro's parents tell her they're moving that she was finally be able to return to a world where old hags ruled bathhouses and giant spiders worked in boiler rooms? But, a long time has passed since her first visit, who is to say that things will still be as they were when she left? Who is to say they won't?

A short poem of mine

Grace Willow has enough problems in her life as it is. The bullying at school is out of control, with students that torture her physically and mentally, and will stop at no end just to see her miserable, an abusive dad, and a mom who is always M.I.A she has no one to turn to. Having life always throw knives at her back, kick rocks at her feet, and blow dust in her face, Grace has seemed to gotten used to falling with no one there to catch her. Logan Hunter is a walking Romeo. He has the good looks, the bad boy personality, the tattoos, and of course the girls. He calls, and they come a' running. He smokes, gets high, drunk, and into fights 24/7. The thing he doesn't have is a good temper. When he's angry he's destructive. Not caring what he does or who he hurts in the process. He can't control his acts, because he can't control how he feels. When the two meet, something is bound to happen, and sparks might just fly. Could be sparks of love... or maybe something much much worse? Warning: This book does contain explicit language and sexual content as well as violent scenes. * This description kinda sucks after looking back on it after year of writing but please give this book a chance. I promise you it's not that terrible :P *

Just my spin on what happens after the 'I do's.' It's basically what I think Hazel does, it's not meant to be a masterpiece but I don't think it's too bad so give it a read and let me know what you think, or what you would change about it. Enjoy. ;)