"Two sleek black feathered wings burst in an explosion of flames from her back, tearing the skin and touching the skies with their dark beauty. She let loose a fearsome scream. Plumes of dust whipped around her from the impact and hazed the area in a veil of air shockwaves." I know it's really bad, but please comment, and send me your feedback! :) I have no idea what this will turn into, it's an interesting transformation so far. Enjoy! Anni