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Click. Click. Someone's breaking in at 221B Baker Street. Step. Step. They're coming up the stairs. The great detective opens to the door to find the perfect deduction waiting for him. The only question to be asked: Why is Elizabeth Holmes standing in his flat? Elizabeth Holmes, genius in the making. A 17 year old girl who could hack into a system leaving no trace in under 10 minutes, escaped from a lock and key boarding school yet she decides to spend her time with her detective older brother. Why you may ask? Well don't we all get a little bored? The Great Game is a foot and the players are being shuffled but who will win? (Based on the BBC Sherlock episode 'The Great Game' I own no characters only Elizabeth)

Mary is new to Gladstone High school. And she meets who she thinks is the boy of her dreams. But is he keeping a deep secret? And what will the consequences be when she finds out? This is a story of true love and death.