"Kiss me." He orders, slamming my locker shut. "Is she coming?" I ask, turning my head to look behind me, but he grabs my face and makes me look up at him. "Yes, now kiss me." I do as told, getting on my tippy toes as I lean up to kiss him. He kisses me back slowly, before he pins me against the lockers and deepens the kiss. My eyes widen and I try to push him away. This isn't part of the deal. He pulls away, a full on smirk plastered on his face. "I lied." He confesses, turning around. "She wasn't coming." Then, he walks away.

Calling all Zodiac Signs! Capricorn Aquarius Pisces Aries Taurus Gemini Cancer Leo Libra Virgo Sagittarius Scorpio You ever wonder what your sign means? Well that's why I'm here! Ta-da! If your new to my page, welcome to my world. If not, hey penguin ducks! Ok, not much to say. So, get to reading!

Scientists worked for years to combine the strands of DNA from animals who were completely incompatible, and for years they failed and failed again. Then they succeeded. They called the things they created Creatures. Soon, however, the government, their main founder was threatening their funding unless they came up with another scientific breakthrough. So they started to try something that most would consider worst than their already hole ridden ethics. They started trying to combine the DNA into already living creatures. Despite the improbability they managed to succeeded, and once the government found out, they made their true reasons for funding known. This is the story of the Experiment, this is the story of the Creatures. If you are reading this on a site other than Wattpad I did no consent for my work to be shown on that page and you are at risk for malware.

So, I was doing a critique tonight. And it was the person’s first book. And I was writing a bunch of the same things that I’ve written on a million other critiques since I started on Wattpad. And, it occurred to me that I keep giving people the same advice—advice that nobody gave me—and advice that beginner writer’s NEED. So I decided to put some of it down in a book, although I’m guessing most people won’t read it. Haha But the title pretty much says it all...