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Run With The Wicked by -ShadowClarke-
-ShadowClarke-
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If you want to live follow these simple rules: 1. Only trust those with the unmatching coloured eyes, 2. Avoid the red portals, 3. Run like hell. After a body is discovered hanging from a clock tower belonging to the fated St Tournes Boarding House, it's clear that the shadows that once thrived have begun to emerge from hiding. Leslie Kass- the seventeen year old girl who rocked up with no memories of her family at the school gates with only a single box. A girl who knows nothing about the twisted realms that linger outside her own and the dangers they hold. When hooded heartthrob Zeke, gothic Denae and sociopath Wolfgang start taking a disturbing amount of interest in her, she's told of the facade of energy that surrounds only people like her. The rare dimension jumping Elites were thought to have been wiped out, but these deadly different eyed teenagers may just have one last hope. What makes these adolescence so special? and what lies beyond the walls that could threaten not only her life, but her sanity? Leslie now resides on a battleground for good and evil, and with so many questions remaining unanswered, there's only one way to figure out what it all means: She needs to die. Cover by @elphadora
Seducing The Doctor. by Very_Blue
Very_Blue
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The cover is the works of @writteninmysoul. Thanks a lot! "You know that you can not resist. Do not even try." Jade purposefully gave the arrogant, sexy billionaire a pointed stare. How dare he say that, especially in the reception area. "Shut your mouth or I will shut it for you. You arrogant whisp.. " He smiled a deep dimpled smile that made her resolve melt just a tiny bit. "With a kiss..." he winked her way. Keeping a respectable, yet close space between them, she glared at him "I don't kiss arrogant geeks like you." His eyes danced, he was laughing at her. The menacingly, irritating Jerk! *******
Memories by PurpleCielo1117
PurpleCielo1117
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❛ In which Johnathan is given a second chance to love and to lose her again. ❜ Ranked #393 in General Fiction 【I Survived The Most Brutal Review】 【Winner of The Brigade Choice Awards for SS】 【Winner of Star Writing Awards for GF】 【Winner of The Undiscovered Awards for GF, Original At Its Core and Straight From The Heart】 【Winner of Rose Awards for GF】