I dont think this story is good. What do you think? On the last chapter let me know if I should continue writing or if i should just stop.

A girl of 15 named Skyler goes to visit her grandfather on a ranch of his, on the islands of Hawaii. There, she meets an untamed black stallion that shows up out of nowhere. Where did he come from? Her uncle does not know where the stallion came from. the moment Skyler met the Stallion, they connected. It was like it was meant to be. As the relationship between man and beast begins to grow, Skyler finds these men who plot to steal the stallion and sell him. They claim he was theirs, and the stallion was worth a lot. Now in a struggle to prevent the criminals from stealing her horse, what will Skyler do? Find out by reading The Black Stallion

Aeons once ruled the world. Now, their empire lies in ruin, and the survivors hide on the fringes of society. Nahlia is a librarian's apprentice who's obsessed with Aeon lore, scavenging for hints of their legendary power. But others are searching too, including the Templars who seek to hunt down the Aeon survivors. When the Templars attack her family, Nahlia is forced to infiltrate a secret academy and rise beyond everything she's ever known. https://davidmusk.com/books/aeonica-the-lost-redeemer