Shattered Reality: An Undertale Fanfiction How realistic is too realistic?

Shiromi, a girl who recently became blind receives a phone call from a strange man who says he can cure her blindness. The man says that he will only cure her if she completes a "small" task for him... 20 DAYS 20 WORLD RECORDS

Heavy-laden and burdened from a life of obesity, Joan attempts to change her life via mountain walks, but dark memories haunt her. Nearly through with life, Joan stumbles onto a hidden treasure. Her discovery consumes her attentions, a drowns out the darkness. As she gathers more of her new-found treasure, she learns the gold may not be hers to keep.