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Espresso von That_Spacey_Girl
Espresso
That_Spacey_Girl
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  • Teile 4
Louise Walters is stuck between two worlds. One with her birth father, whom she hasn't met throughout her seventeen year life. And the other with her mother, step-dad, and step-brother, which doesn't seem so promising after the four step-dads that came before her mother, Tracey's, new addiction. Harvey. Dean Abrams leads a simple life, or that's what he likes to call it. Working at his father's coffee shop down the street, Dean hasn't ever known a life outside of Cherry Lane. Sure, he works a five day week at almost minimum wage, but his job was practically handed to him a year ago on his sixteenth birthday. But when their two lives collides, a cliché romance isn't born from "love at first sight", or whatever that's supposed to mean. With more arguments than "I love you"s, and an addiction to coffee, Louise and Dean don't hit it off, until...
One Shots von luciferspinkwings
One Shots
luciferspinkwings
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  • Stimmen 28
  • Teile 3
A collection of small one-shots to help to practice my writing and to work on in between my stories. I hope you enjoy them. Suggestions are welcome, but I won't promise to do them unless I really like the idea of course. Critiques and feedback are always welcome. I would appreciate it even, so don't be afraid to hold back if you see something I can improve on. Thank you. 'Look into your heart and write' Copyright 2016 (C) LuciferMorningstar12 All rights reserved. [Cover by: Myself]
The Journey Taken Together von Alexa781
The Journey Taken Together
Alexa781
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  • Teile 38
Love is a strong word. It is said to those we care for the most. Some think love never dies. However, this is not the case for Thea Bartholomew and Dennis Ford. Thea Bartholomew, a strong yet passionate lover is stuck between two guys. Will she make the right choice? Dennis Ford, a hopeless romantic, is forced to choose between his career and the girl of his dreams. Will he make the right choice? Will they both get the happy ending they have been waiting for? Or will they be torn to pieces by the curse of life's constant challenges? Cover made by: @KristinaVallaste Started: May 25, 2016 Ended: August 28, 2016
Every Teen Romance Ever von darthallow
Every Teen Romance Ever
darthallow
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  • Teile 18
Read so many cliched teen romances that you can't even tell their plots apart? Read this.
A Dream That I Dream von onemillionberries
A Dream That I Dream
onemillionberries
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  • Stimmen 24
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Don't we all have those dreams where we wish for more? We usually find ourselves daydreaming about this dream. This is a poem about a girl with a dream. My amazing cover is by @WoodSpirit Games of Poetry -3rd place
Great Escape von karasubara
Great Escape
karasubara
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There may be heart aches, but we'll never be each others' mistakes.
The Beginning of a New Life von The_True_Me_Series
The Beginning of a New Life
The_True_Me_Series
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  • Stimmen 8
  • Teile 1
Catherine is the kind of girl that doesn't know how exquisitely outstanding she is. Even though she is a prodigy, she decides to conceal this from everyone she meets including her closest family and friends. What she created was supposed to help people like the police, FBI, and CIA. Unfortunately instead she got involved with the wrong people and now every killer and special agent want her dead. Trusting people isn't an option. She'd fallen into that trap one too many times. The trust would only result in abduction or close calls with death. When Catherine is driven against the wall, she has no choice but to let herself trust again and call a mysterious number left in her mailbox. "Call this # (630) 555-8596 if you want all your problems to go away." A/N: My books are based on Tom Cruise movies (if you don't enjoy his movies then don't read my books, if you like his movies but don't care for him don't worry my books are based on his movies, not him).
Inferno von Amb3rmart1ns
Inferno
Amb3rmart1ns
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  • Stimmen 171
  • Teile 7
Dion was always on her own. Having no one to trust but herself. Stealing was the only way to survive, and she was the best. She could steal anything and you wouldn't even notice. Seeing those men enter that alley, she just couldn't resist. If only she turned away from the stranger's, then she wouldn't have been trapped in their house. In the Underworld. Amazing cover made by: @jakepatt
The Society {Wattys2017} von hayo_girls
The Society {Wattys2017}
hayo_girls
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  • Teile 28
Since the start of humankind, a new breed of human has been forming. One that has the powers that can make one "immortal". No one has been aware of these super humans until now. When an escaped, vengeance-seeking psychopath ends up at Anne's school, her life changes forever when she ends up being a victim. When she's at the hospital, she finds out what she and her father truly are. She finds a whole society filled with these supernatural that had been kept secret from all inferior beings. Can this secret be kept still when Anne's powers flourish for everyone to see?
Autumn (Editing) von empty-promises
Autumn (Editing)
empty-promises
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This isn't a love story. The guy doesn't get the girl. There's no picnics, no dates, no romance. However, there is a reason why I did it. If you were me, you would've done the same. -- "Joe get off the track!" "Why?" "I don't want to see you get killed!" "But surely everyone wants to be in someone's last moments on earth?"