First time writing please tell me if I should continue or if I'm just wasting my time :)

Everyday, hundreds of books are published on Wattpad, and a huge part of them are never read. This book will be composed of interviews with unknown authors and their stories. Come and join these authors as they beginning their adventure of being authors!

Cursed with the chains of an empath insight and vivid dreams, Willow Haywood has learned to live her life on the defense. Her world shatters when an ominous figure in her dreams leaves behind an omen that follows her into her waking hours. As Willow learns the beautifully dark secrets of her life she has no choice but to flee to unknown dimensions. Secrets, lore, and the one made of her soul await her. Haunting lives of the past beckon her due. This isn't the love story you know...

"Phone her!" I said after reading the letter. "Hello?" Came her sweet voice, calming me in seconds. "Raven please come back I-I-I love y-you so much" Chase whispered into the phone. "I can't it's too late" She replied after a few seconds of silence. "Too late for what?" I asked starting to panic. All of a sudden there was a scream, an explosion , then nothing. * * * * * * People say that time heals all wounds but just because the wound is gone doesn't mean that there isn't a scar left behind. * * * * * * Raven's life has been anything but simple all she wants to do is take a break from everything but fate otherwise known as Aiden has other ideas.

There is a new version being created Please comment :) I would like to improve my writing skills.