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The Last Princess // Book One by midnightcupofnoodles
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Ruthless Alphas, double crossing allies and one young princess thrust into their darkly seductive world. ╾─────╼ Princess Lyandra, the Grand Alpha's daughter, is facing the most challenging task of her life: finding peace between the werewolves and the humans. When a band of werewolves called the Crusaders threaten to expose their species, she needs to reclaim her right to be an Alpha while convincing the humans her people aren't the animalistic brutes of legend. Although she's been living among the humans for years, she isn't sure she's got what it takes, especially standing up to the Alphas. Thrust into a world of political intrigue, Lyandra is forced to accept the help of her mysterious mate Raven, a man she isn't sure she can trust. A story of love, duty, and death in a world on the brink of revolution. ╾─────╼ 𝗻𝗲𝘄 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱 𝗰𝗵𝗿𝗼𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗹𝗲𝘀// book one 𝗹𝘆𝗮𝗻𝗱𝗿𝗮 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗿𝗮𝘃𝗲𝗻// book one ╾─────╼ 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗲𝗱// 30 March 2020, first draft completed on 16 September 2020 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘁𝘂𝘀// second draft being rewritten 𝗴𝗲𝗻𝗿𝗲// urban low fantasy, romance, new adult, werewolf 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗻𝘁 𝗽𝗲𝗿 𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗽𝘁𝗲𝗿 // 1.5k to 2k 𝗼𝘃𝗲𝗿𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗻𝘁// 120k+ 𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻// second draft, editing underway ╾─────╼ 𝗳𝗲𝗮𝘁𝘂𝗿𝗲𝗱// @werewolf @projectwomanup @undiscoveredwolves @action @YAFantasy @cupid @dangerouslove 𝗮𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱𝘀// the dream awards 2020, prime awards 2020 final round, phantom awards, wicked awards, house spotlight at OlympusWriting 𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀// #3 in kickass, #9 in starcrossed, #3 in assassin
AC/DC by DannyAsokan
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* MORE CHAPTERS WILL BE UPDATED SOON. THANK YOU :) * Mark Mangal is the perfect epitome of a 16-year old teenager. Smart, A-lister, prefect- he is the de facto celebrity of the school. However, he's also notorious for one thing- lying. He may be a womanizer in front of the entire school, even to his best friend, Connor Lee, whom he keeps no secrets from. Yet, inside his heart, he yearns for only one person, the cute, introverted boy Rhett Evans. Rhett however, is the complete reciprocal of Mark. Average, C-lister, a nobody- he had the feeling that his life would change when he met Mark. And yes it did, for he began to see life in a way that his immature self had never seen. Both the boys shared a bond that no other boys shared, so much so that Rhett had no idea that Mark had fallen in love with him. But like every friendship, everything goes kaput when one thing comes into play. The truth. Rhett's homophobia makes him discard Mark as a friend when he finds out the truth about him, even when Mark decides to put aside his unrequited love for the sake of maintaining the friendship. Mark goes into depression upon learning that Rhett is no longer his ally, and insulted him with labels despite insisting that he's bisexual, and not gay. Trying to move on, Mark tries his best to never go down that 'horrendous' path again. But can Mark truly move on from Rhett and hide that side of him forever? Or will it come back to him- for a happier ending this time around?
Volomina: Tales of a Demoness [Volume I] by Volomina
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[FOREWORD - I cannot take full credit for this work. This is a collaborative piece, worked on by both me and a Swedish friend outside of Wattpad. Very much a work in progress. Hope you enjoy, and please do not steal, or use without my permission (if it even gets big enough for anyone to want to do that, eheh...). Rated mature for potential strong language, violence, graphic descriptions, and innuendo.] When a powerful demoness is disgraced, disowned and dumped out of the Underworld, she strives to find a way to live happy in the surface world of the living, Lahgoas. However, there might be more obstacles in her path than she thought... The first instalment in an intended series, "Volomina: Tales of a Demoness" (or "V:ToaD") follows Volomina as she is faced with perilous quests, priests and paladins, monsters, demons, ghosts of the past, matters of the heart, the mighty denizens of the heavens themselves... and occasionally, fatal boredom. Set in an original world, "V:ToaD" is a euphuistic tale meant to immerse, inspire, and stir the heart. Some of the chapters have had suggested music linked in the media by the authors for a truly engrossing experience that ensnares all of your senses. [Cover art by yours truly. Please no steal.]
Snow ✓ by itskristycase
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Sixty orbits have passed since the faeries lost the Great War against the mortals and were pushed to the brink of extinction. Those that remain inhabit the Holókaustos, trapped by a curse, rotting away between this world and the next. That is, until a bastard halfling with something to prove concocts an escape plan involving a girl born of mortal blood and magic. ☆☆☆ A girl with a peculiar pedigree is dumped on a stranger's doorstep during the worst snowstorm the hamlet Myst has ever known. Selectively mute, she refuses to tell her hosts from whence she came and her name. For lack of knowing what else to do, the crotchety old woman and her grandson Mat grant her sanctuary and take to calling her Snow. But her very existence disrupts their daily lives. The mystery comes to a head when a dead man is discovered in the front yard after the first serious thaw. Strangers turned ragtag confidants, they dispose of the body. Orbits pass without incident, slackening their resolve to keep the girl their best-kept secret. When Mat introduces her to an old friend with his own dangerous secret, he threatens all they hold dear. The world's suddenly at their door, and it quickly becomes clear that Snow's meant for greater things. A story of loss, friendship and all the grit in between. #15 in fantasy | December 2018 #10 in adventure | December 2018 #4 in world building | December 2018 #1 in speculative fiction | December 2018 #2 in quest | September 2018 #3 in fairies | September 2018 #7 in scifi-fantasy | September 2018 #123 in new adult | August 2018 #183 in fairytale | August 2018 #2 in human experimentation | July 2018 First installment of an intended series. Rated PG-13
The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
The Ephemeral Dreams: Into The New World (#Wattys2016) by ophelia1233
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The two twins Zinnia and Zeph Hilbert and their five friends find themselves teleported into the magical world where unknown beings dwell. The seven friends need to find a way out of this world, back into their own, while their hearts are drawn more and more to the unknown world. Will they chose to stay or they chose to go back to where they came from... "You may found your heart torn between the choice to stay or to leave..." The witch said. Her body was transparent, like a ghost. The cold seeped through her body, into his bones, and she shivered. The hairs on the back of Zinnia's neck prickled and stood. "What are you trying to say?" "Your friends and brother are the same, their hearts will be torn into two. From the very beginning, this world is where you come from, where you were born. The very fact that you still don't remember amazes me." And with that she vanished, fading away into the darkness. Zinnia stood there, sighed inwardly "I don't know what to do, that's why I came here to ask you..." She leaned her body against the tree. **************UNEDITED****************** ********UPDATE EVERY MONDAY**********
We Were Gods: Oleander: Book One by Anubis12ra
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'It's dark in the tombs, the air is thick with static and storm threatening the occupants with each labored breath. Golden eyes lock with icy blue hues, an unstated challenge between the two Gods. Anubis raised his inked back; a thick black oil leaking from the cracked skin as he snarls and snaps sharpening canines. "You betrayed me!" He roars. "And what would you have me do?! Deny a head God?!" The blue eyed God bellows, blackened ink dripping from shredded lips. The human shell is so easy to break and give way beneath a God's true form.' We Were Gods is a book about a young man named Oleander who finds out he is a God. The only problem is he just wants to be a normal mortal, especially since all Gods and Goddesses from every religion are expected to work in the Death Justice System. Not only that but his brother is set on destroying Oleander and his friends from a war that started back when they were just young Gods. Journey with Oleander and his new found friends to discover the inner workings of Gods, the secrets of their past lives, and finishing a war that is threatening all of mankind.