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Reincarnate by SmileIfYouSeeThis
SmileIfYouSeeThis
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"If you have any last words, speak now" When Mikeal Atrovisi is shot four times in his apartment his life changes forever. It turns out Mikael isn't just anybody. He's a Maester- a magical being with the ability to control others. Thrust into a magical underworld with his quirky best friend Tori, he struggles to find his place in this new reality. Join Mikael as he uncovers a thousand year old secret and comes to realize his destiny is to end an ancient war. *** Cover Made by knockturn ******
Spies, Thieves, and Revolutionaries by insertafabuserhere
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All Dinah Ahmadi wanted was better living conditions for the people of her tribe. Instead, she got the chance of a merciless revenge. A chance that will turn her world upside down. Motivated by all the wrong reasons, Dinah revolts against the Crown. Desperate for help, she relies on a shady traveler, an exiled prince, and a retired prostitute turned brothel madam. She journeys the Empire with her band of misfits, meeting mysterious, mischievous creatures, and rallying troops for her cause. Guided by her flaming blood lust that will only be satisfied by the sweet nectar of revenge, Dinah awaits the day of judgement. The day the guilty will burn. Cover by @DrWidAA
A Game Called Love by aayika
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" I'll destroy you in the most beautiful way possible, and when I leave you, you'll finally understand why storms are named after people. " She burned like the sun,trying to hide all the darkness that clouded her life,but her fire burned him to ashes. Reece Salazar has spent his entire life coming second to the great Aurora Williams.The perfect little miss goody shoes who never loses an opportunity to rub her victory on his face.Best friends at six,bitter rivals at twenty.When the battles get personal and it's no more about business deals and projects but love and seduction,will they realize they have more to lose than what they have to win?
30 Days To Say Goodbye [#Wattys2016] by teenagebookworm_
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What if you were told you only had thirty days to live and then the whole of the human race would suddenly vanish? We've had many warnings that the world is ending in the past, but how do you know if this one is the end or not? Some people believe it; others refused to be fooled... However, it isn't a normal thirty days they experience... Will seventeen year old Charlotte and her family survive the 'end of the world?'