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*COMPLETED* Highest Ranking- #2 in Action Chance Wiliams isn't your avarage teenager. She is the bad girl of the school and most feared girl of the New York . She is the gang leader of the Black rose. Her gang is number 1 in New York. Now meet Ace Grayson. He is the leader of the White Shadows. He's gang moved from London to New York. His gang was the #1 in London. What happens when this 2 meet each other. Both of them want to be # 1. And plus school drama, love, hate and old enemies. But at the end who will win that game? Read and find out. Copyright of rainbows_moon All Rights Reserved. 2016.

• in which jemma calburn is married, but harry walloby is still waiting...

"They say if you dream a thing more than once, it's sure to come true," I tell my daughter Shelby, quoting her favourite Disney character and trying to believe it myself. Ever since I introduced Shelby to her first Disney film, she's dreamed of working at Disney World. What could seem better to an eleven year old than being a beautiful princess at the happiest place on Earth? My Shelby might not be like the other children in her class. But who says different is wrong? She's simply a little girl with big dreams. "Do not be fooled by its commonplace appearance. Like so many things, it is not what is outside, but what is inside that counts." - Aladdin

A permanent supernatural cyclone rages across the mystical country of Thrace. The only inhabitants are those of the royal family who once ruled and they survive only by staying within the eye of the storm. Aella is the daughter of King Thaumas and Queen Electra, and was born after the storm ravaged Thrace. Aella knows the storm didn't always exist. But who hated her family enough to curse them? And can Aella stop it before time runs out? HIGHEST RANKING-8/11/2016- #51 in Fantasy

Erica, Milani, KayKay, Cortlin Madison, and Riley/Pink all live in the same house with there boyfriends. Erica is with Kawhi. Milani is with Ray Ray. KayKay is with Cody. Cortlin is with Prince. Riley is with Roc. Last but not least, Madison is with Prodigy. These girls are my favs and I love them to death. We are all about the same age and we just graduated high school. High school was fun bruhh but its over now. Our boyfriends all have good jobs and everything is going great all until KayKay decided she had feelings for somebody else. This boy(Dean) is a big drug dealer. He sells everything from cocaine to marijuana. we try to help her but she won't listen. And we all know that family knows best. When she doesn't listen, there is hell to pay for each and every girl.

Not all promises are kept. Especially when there is blood on the line

She loved the attention when she was a singer. She loved the pain when she was a fighter. She loved the books when she was a nerd. Singing with her school's golden boy and possibly fighting him underground is bad enough. But him finding out who she really is, is even worse. But it doesn't end there. What if her demons come back to haunt her? What if her torturer comes back to torture her? ____________ "She can't fool me. I know that they're the same people. Judging by their name, same kissable lips..." -Tie ____________ Highest Rank: #283 in teen fiction - January 10, 2017 #1 in Projectbadassgirl

While coping through many tragic deaths, first her parents, then her best friends, Veronica Sanchez needs to deal with her fucked up life. But what will she do when her best friend Lily, who recently died from suicide sends her messages about a 'demon' who wants to murder her. What measures will she take? Will she stop talking to those who she cares about and stay quiet to survive? Read more to find out This story needs editing and details which im trying to get better at but i will indeed edit at the END of the story Pleasee DON'T copy cuz thats not cool Currently: #390 in paranormal Highest rank: #214 in paranormal