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The Journey Taken Together by Alexa781
Alexa781
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Love is a strong word. It is said to those we care for the most. Some think love never dies. However, this is not the case for Thea Bartholomew and Dennis Ford. Thea Bartholomew, a strong yet passionate lover is stuck between two guys. Will she make the right choice? Dennis Ford, a hopeless romantic, is forced to choose between his career and the girl of his dreams. Will he make the right choice? Will they both get the happy ending they have been waiting for? Or will they be torn to pieces by the curse of life's constant challenges? Cover made by: @KristinaVallaste Started: May 25, 2016 Ended: August 28, 2016
30 Days To Say Goodbye [#Wattys2016] by teenagebookworm_
teenagebookworm_
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What if you were told you only had thirty days to live and then the whole of the human race would suddenly vanish? We've had many warnings that the world is ending in the past, but how do you know if this one is the end or not? Some people believe it; others refused to be fooled... However, it isn't a normal thirty days they experience... Will seventeen year old Charlotte and her family survive the 'end of the world?'
How We Were | ✔️ (Complete) by MegHahn
MegHahn
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[WATTYS 2016 WINNER!] [COSMOPOLITAN Featured!] Trapped in her white trash hell, Layla Danner is failing at life. Her friend Peyton? Everybody thinks he's perfect, a staggeringly rich, handsome, and well-mannered story book prince. But they don't know what Layla knows. And she'll never tell. Jake? Jake's trouble. A down and dirty charmer, this one's got a devil-may-care attitude and a mouth to match. Everything goes to hell in a handbasket when he shows up to town one summer. Layla never meant to fall in love. All she wanted to do was finish her senior year, get the hell out of this town and never, ever look back. But when mysterious secrets from the boys' past refuse to stay buried, Layla must decide how far she'll go for a chance at a once in a lifetime love. Follow three unforgettable characters in this captivatingly melodramatic, soap-operatic, and larger-than-life tale of first loves, loyalty, intrigue and the magic of growing up. ♦️WARNING: This writer is a hopeless romantic with a filthy mouth and a dirty mind who loves to re-work cliches. The style of the story reflects this. Also, some dark themes. ♦️
When You're Gone (Of Liberties And Loss, #2) by Lacrine_Sienna
Lacrine_Sienna
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Seventeen years, ten months, two weeks, three days... Each moment is agony. Every second of every day, George Beaumont is reminded of his young wife's untimely death. With every glimpse of that painting up on that mantle, with every glimpse of his only son. By this point, he is addicted to laudanum and half-mad with guilt. In his deluded mind, he is her murderer. Following the aftermath of his closest friend's attempt to end her life, Raymond Beaumont finds an old journal belonging to a woman who he barely had gotten to know- his mother. Who really was the farmer's daughter who became a duchess? He chases clues of a possible murder with an heiress whose wounds have not yet even closed. As they race through the countryside, everything begins to fall into place and the big picture is much darker than they ever could have imagined. A choice. A mystery. A betrayal. Secrets have a horrible way of revealing themselves... Highest Ranking: #10 in Historical Fiction
HUMAN-LESS by HazelClaireIvy
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A weapon unlike any other. A haunting tale of family secrets, madness, and healing. #10 Science Fiction - highest rank