There is no night in the Everburning City. There can never be. ***** For four hundred years the Everburning City has withstood the advance of the life-strangling fog known as the Gloam. Its walls have held back five invasions, but on the eve of the sixth, the city's inhabitants know things have changed. Golems are coming out of the mist, and the bodies of the dead are rising at the Gloam's bidding. The city's last and most desperate line of defence comes in the form of the Crafters, individuals who can channel the power of fire, though they risk their sanity each time they do. The brightest of these valiant heroes are Tabitha a'Loria and her apprentice Gerald Reath. Risking their lives, they mount their airships, determined to save the last bastion of humanity - the Everburning City. [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]]

In the Kingdom of Pramira, a wicked Queen with eyes as orange as a burning fire sits on a throne of bones. Robed warriors stir rumors of rebellion as they vow revenge against their ruler. And a lost princess is promised the return of her crown and her kingdom. Outside of the Kingdom, Death opens his arms to the world. An army of the Undead increases relentlessly as they watch from the shadows, the smell of rot growing as corpses rise. Soon they will rise in unimaginable numbers, unleashing chaos onto the lands. Soon there will be war between the Living and the Dead, one that leaves no room for enemies. ---------------------------------------------------- first draft • subject to change ---------------------------------------------------- The Kingdoms of Bone • book 1

What can a slave girl do when she's but a pawn in a game of kings? Sent to infiltrate the enemy kingdom as the new bride of the King of Palandyre, Cinclair has only one goal in mind: the prize is her freedom, the price is his life, and the task is murder. But the man she must kill ignites in her a fire she cannot quench, sends her blood racing with the first flash of his grin and the tilt of his brow, and it feels like a dagger in her gut to see him falling for a mask she wears and the lies she's spun, because one more day his passion grows means one less day that he may live. As stakes climb higher and the war drums pound louder outside the castle walls, the hour of his death draws unforgivably near. But the heart cannot kill what the heart beats for... and her heart beats for his. [ cover by @VaineLuchia ]

A series of short stories revolving around characters from my fantasy world Pherrai. Basically bonus content to my books xD It's rated mature because some content may be triggering to certain audiences -- I don't censor myself when it comes to the crap my characters have been through (I do not, however, write smut v.v Nor will you find any cursing herein). #840 in short story 7/2/16

Aeons once ruled the world. Now, their empire lies in ruin, and the survivors hide on the fringes of society. Nahlia is a librarian's apprentice who's obsessed with Aeon lore, scavenging for hints of their legendary power. But others are searching too, including the Templars who seek to hunt down the Aeon survivors. When the Templars attack her family, Nahlia is forced to infiltrate a secret academy and rise beyond everything she's ever known. https://davidmusk.com/books/aeonica-the-lost-redeemer

[COMICS OUT NOW!] What's worse than going to school? Going to school for knights in another world! After accidentally witnessing a woman killing a demon in the streets of Boston, Valeriana is kidnapped and forced to enroll in the magical Celeste Academy. It would've been great if she fit right in, but while everyone's calling upon fireballs and tornadoes, she's stuck being the only human in class! Surely demons can wait from destroying the world until she gets her life together, right? |Wattpad version is complete, but is otherwise an old draft. For the revised and edited one, please go to mylovelywtiter.co|

A storm is brewing in Vorbereich. Twenty years after a war with the Lindtin powers that ended in horrible losses for the country and its allies, the country is still as broken and divided as it was when the war ended... except, of course, for the ruling classes, who go to balls and dinner parties while the rest of the country struggles to survive. However, one man believes he can change that: a man that is known simply as the Archangel. Many believe that what he does is going to finally unify Vorbereich and bring the country back to the strength it had before the war. However, when an outlaw, an heir to a fortune, and a police inspector cross paths, it becomes clear to them that his intentions are less than pure. And that it's up to them to stop him, before another war breaks out. Note: This is a sample. The full book is currently available for preorder at https://www.amazon.com/Assassins-Blade-Archangel-Trilogy-Book-ebook/dp/B07J4FMGQX/ref=pd_ybh_a_20?_encoding=UTF8&psc=1&refRID=HKB32PKKGJSGVGPGCXQB

(Ireale Series #1) In the country of Hierra, and a good distance away from Narla, a small village of Magicians and non-Magicians, there lives a girl. To Ryma, everyday is like a whole new cycle. One fateful night, a white dragon comes falling from the sky. And when she decides to take a look, something entirely impossible happens to the dragon that causes her to have no choice but to follow on a journey with it. On this little adventure, something new blooms in her -- something that gives her a whole new purpose to live.

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