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(The 2016 Awards Fantasy Winner!!) Born from evil and hate aroused by humans, creatures named Kira inhabit the earth hidden from sight. They appear human, but are far from it, they have powers and a thirst for fear. A thirst that can only be quenched by cold blooded murder. ************ Seventeen year old Brianna Manel's father abandoned her at a young age, and since then her dreams have been littered with past memories that leave her feeling ill. Her Mom is love-sick and spends day and night waiting for her husband to come home. Leaving Brie to run the house. With a life as difficult as hers, Brie has enough abnormal things to keep her busy, so the last thing she expects is to sign herself up for an early death. When she accidentally witnesses new and mysterious kid, Keith Lamit, become invisible right before her eyes, she's thrown into an entirely different world where killing is done for the mere fun of it. Soon Brie is running for her life. No longer able to identify what is real and what is fantasy. No longer able to trust anyone and no longer sure of what to think. Only knowing one thing... Keith is not human and he wants her dead. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ WARNING! Book contains graphic violence, sexual scenes of sorts, and profanity. (read at your own risk...or just read. Whichever you prefer really...) Amazing cover made by @taintedrein ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rankings: #3/24 thepurpleawards #13/94 dreamers #61/405 mission #446/2.76k evil #831/5.38k paranormal Enjoy? - Esmer

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Meet Rosalie Wolf. A regular teenager whose destiny is completely changed when she encounters Dr. Watson and develops feelings for him, but will he fall for her as well? What will be the price they'll have to pay to be together? And what destiny will be waiting for them ahead?

Jordan's life changed the moment she met Jesse Jacobsen. He was immature, cocky, and the most annoying boy she had ever met in her entire life. And he fell hopelessly in love with her at first sight. Four years later and nothing much has changed between them. Though academically bright, Jordan isn't exactly the smartest when it comes to love. Even though at times Jesse makes it clearly obvious how he feels about her, she just doesn't get it. Or... she's deeply in denial. After being sent away because of their bad behavior, Jordan finds out Jesse's biggest secret. As they grow closer, they find themselves getting deeper and deeper into something that seems impossible to get out of. She must keep her growing relationship with her enemy a secret from everyone close to her. Her life, and theirs, depends on it. (Watty Awards 2011 Winner)

Christian Ryder may be seen as a heartthrob by the majority of the world's female population, but to Sophia Hastings, he might as well be the newest addition to her hometown's local zoo. Sophia is a young, aspiring actress with big dreams who swears having to work with Christian Ryder wouldn't be worth all the fame in the world. Christian is a cocky womanizer whose world is turned upside down when he realizes his new leading lady just so happens to openly hate his guts. Is it even possible for Christian and Sophia to learn to get along long enough to make a movie, or will hatred, scandal and childish games destroy their careers? *** My eyes widened and I randomly exclaimed, "Oh, my God!" "What?" "Christian, thanks to you, I now understand what people mean when they say you're dark and handsome!" Christian looked smug. "I knew you would eventually." "They mean that when it's dark, you're handsome!" The smug look on his face disappeared. "I hate you." *** Contains some spoilers to Kidnap My Heart.

Nerdy Dakota Evans makes the biggest mistake of her life by falling in love with her best friend, Aaron Ford. Despite coming from entirely different cliques in school, will their relationship have a chance? *** In a high school where everyone belongs to cliques, nerdy and boyish Dakota Evans' friendship with basketball jock, Aaron Ford, becomes a big issue. Aaron's highly protective of Dakota and doesn't realize that she's in love with him. With their friendship eventually going on the rocks, will Aaron finally realize his true feelings for Dakota before it's too late? [[word count: 90,000-100,000 words]]