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Stellar Heroes and The Mariner's Compass by EdisonThe
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It has been thousand of years since the "Universal War" was halted. The twelve chosen heroes must regain their powers before Umbra, the god of darkness and shadow escape form their seal. In order to regain their lost powers, they must seek help from the human race and travel to a planet named Vizmiluz, the only living planet they can hope to live and seek for help. But as time passed by, hope was vanishing and forgotten. Only chosen ones can control their unfathomable power. Few were chosen. Few had complied. And few hope remains...
The Saviour [Soul Mate Secrets #1] by dreamy_
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Joy-Anna Michaels can't stop getting in trouble. Not the sneaking-out-of-house-after-curfew trouble, but the near-death-experiences trouble. Countless times she has almost died, but when the last straw has been drawn Joy-Anna ends up accidentally calling the big guns to help. Little did she expect her saviour to be a hot boy. Lucien, an angel. A boy who wants to be a top ranked angel, an archangel. So when an opportunity arises of saving a teenage girl in order to get his rank, Lucien is more than thrilled. If he can protect this girl for a few months he'll get just what he wants, but what happens when he has to choose between her and his wings? *Will be in the Watty Awards 2013*
The Craters in the Moon by jetaime26
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Arden Gray: A catty, beautiful, endlessly underestimated teenage girl drowning in a crippling tidal wave of depression. She spends more time in the realm of books than reality, and struggles to keep her head above water as her world seemingly comes crashing down around her. Lucas Riverton: The seventeen year old boy in the awkward stage between child and adulthood, who works at a local bookstore as a means of escape. He barely knows Arden, but is positive that there is something about her, something he wants to devote the rest of his life to figuring out. Two worlds connect in an unfathomable force as young lovers relish in the discovery of a feeling that is beyond description--- and do everything in their power to prevent the inevitable destruction of it. ~~ REVIEWS ~~ "A poignant story about the deterioration of love between two young teenagers that don't know anything but how to fall." "...flawless, simple, and very imaginative." "This is a wonderful, angsty story...read in one sitting!" "Arden Gray is a unique and quirky character that I found myself growing attached to right away...This author manages to pack more emotion in one sentence of dialogue than most people can in a whole paragraph of metaphorical description."