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Creatures At Sea [LGBT] by FionaJohn
FionaJohn
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Who would have thought? Who would have thought when his parents had kicked his sister and him out to some run down summer camp their world could take another turn? He hadn't expected it. He hadn't expected a monster to chase them through a portal and into a world where anything magical, ranging from witches to magical tattoos to dragons, existed. It was a wet painful rip off from Alice in the Wonderland as they fell through the hole. [May contain Violence, Strong Language and Mature Content. Viewers discretion is advised.]
Outside The Lines by honestcritiques
honestcritiques
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This is a story about breaking the stereotypes. Story of a heartbreaker who has his heart broken by someone he thought loved him. Story of a 'good girl' who decides that revenge is the only way to teach him a lesson. Within this one story, the stories of many other people are intertwined. Of a girl who is branded a slut. Of a boy who is bullied for being fat. Of a girl who is depressed. Of a boy who is labeled bad. And many, many others. 29th July 2016: #179 6th August 2016: #213 29th August 2016: #123 Cover made by @ArfaAhsan
I AM MORIX  by Janicexiaosyuen
Janicexiaosyuen
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'Morixes.' She shuddered at the word. Papa had told her many scary stories about these Morixes. She did not want to meet any of them at all. If fate was cruel that she might end up meeting one, she knew she would definitely run as fast as her little feet could carry her. But on the day when she finally met one lying injured and defenseless on the ground, she ran. She ran, not away from it but towards it. ********* This is the story of Scarlett, a happy-go-lucky girl who found a young Morix who was thrown unexpectedly into her world. Trained to feel no emotions and assassinate human intruders in the Morix world, he was trapped in the world full of humans whom he was taught to despise since he was very young. Will he find a way to return to where he belonged or will he stay trapped forever with this annoyingly happy human girl and her father (and MiaoMiao) in a world where he did not belong to? But most importantly, will Kian who would have surrendered to nothing, surrender willingly to feel emotions, to be happy, to care and finally to learn how to love? Join Kian and Scarlett in their journey to discover friendship, love, and the mystery of the two worlds. Author's note- Hmm? Oh, you don't know what's a Morix? Read on to find out. :)