I don't really know, it's a short story I wrote for a competition, and I want your opinions. I have an idea for a story from this but I don't know if I should write it or not.

Two hundred years after the Earth was scorched by nuclear fire, civilisation has arisen from the depths of the very planet they had corrupted. On the surface, the remaining groups of humans are sent back to the Dark Ages, as they learn right from wrong, form factions and cults, and let history repeat itself. The narrative follows the story of a wasteland wanderer known as Myles Millennium, who seeks vengeance on the raiders that had murdered his family in his childhood. Redemption, he expects, but following his actions brings consequences that have unforeseeable effects on his life, and the lives of those he cares about.