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BloodBound by thedarkroomofsecrets
thedarkroomofsecrets
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Seraphina, a conflicted vampire, discovers an ancient prophecy that intertwines her fate with a mysterious young man named Ezra. As their forbidden love blossoms, they are thrust into a treacherous journey, navigating a web of family secrets, and dark forces. With each step, they must confront their deepest fears and make unimaginable sacrifices in a race against time. Will their love transcend the boundaries of destiny, or will they be consumed by the shadows that threaten to tear them apart?
The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
Divine by Abriyah1
Abriyah1
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•There's something divine in you• Eric White doesn't believe in much but what he does he stands by. Looking for a place to hold his next art exhibition he clashes with a conservative realtor. While his personal life strives to destroy him will she be his refuge? Ella Ithemba might seem meek but push her buttons and you'll regret it. She was content in her life. Finding comfort in that status quote how will she react when it's all tossed upside down? What started as a business encounter might blossom into a love neither knew they were looking for. It might quite possible been divine intervention. © 2018 Abriyah May-El