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Candy Floss  ✅ by xxtypicalscorpianxx
Candy Floss ✅
xxtypicalscorpianxx
  • Reads 4,944
  • Votes 286
  • Parts 10
Between keeping up with a nagging Cameron Fletcher aka the school's royal celebrity and pretending to be someone she's not, Peyton Stewart has her hand full with trouble, getting her self an anonymous admirer is just a cherry on the top. Specially when they are sending her candy floss for extra treat.
Errand Runners by Next_JK_Rowling
Errand Runners
Next_JK_Rowling
  • Reads 327,700
  • Votes 20,638
  • Parts 46
[Check out BOUNTY HUNTERS, the sequel to Errand Runners] Unlike the other criminals in Nova City, Nole Vale has a curfew. While most civilians just want to survive in their crime-ridden, gang-infested city, this sixteen-year old is determined to conquer the city streets and provide for his brother and sister by any means necessary. But after crashing into a mysterious teenager, Nole is suddenly accused of a crime he didn't commit and his stable way of life begins to crumble. With the help of a diverse, yet peculiar group of teenagers, he must navigate his way through lethal gangs, brutal City Enforcers, and a corrupt city system in order to clear his name and keep himself and his siblings alive. Cover by @sequester All rights reserved. All material in this book (Errand Runners), and everything on this account is, unless otherwise stated, the property of the owner, creator and author of this work (@Next_JK_Rowling). Copyright and other intellectual property laws protect these materials. Reproduction or retransmission, in whole or in part, or in any manner, without the prior written consent of the copyright holder is a violation of the Copyright, Patents and Design Act of 1988 law and is punishable by law.
Nebula by SilverGalaxySkies
Nebula
SilverGalaxySkies
  • Reads 739
  • Votes 67
  • Parts 12
--This is a collection of short stories about and by the Captain of the Presley Jackson-- A NOTE TO READERS: To avoid 'confusion' to some - each story is separated into PARTS meaning that they shouldn't be treated individually but instead as one. So if you want to leave a comment then please consider both parts and the content within before doing so. Thank you very much for actually reading as I know you want a summary which is below :) "What do you suppose a 'home' is? A place which you live in? Four walls that protect you from all sorts of damage and destruction from the outside? A planet, maybe? Well my home was never anything like that. It wasn't something you simply went inside with a knock or two. It wasn't some place you could drive to in a car or fly to in a ship. I wasn't normal enough for something as mundane as that. My home is in probably the strangest of places. The galaxy. Billions upon billions of solar systems and phenomenon of epic proportions that one can look at by just looking up. That's where you'll find me. That's where I belong." --Expect intergalactic adventures, mystery and space in every part. Each being a full short story telling the life and times of the captain from her point of view-- ((Shoutouts are dumb and I don't usually do them but in this case AnimalLuver39 deserves one for the awesome cover. That is all.))
Two Origins (SLOW UPDATES) by fukawa-s
Two Origins (SLOW UPDATES)
fukawa-s
  • Reads 242
  • Votes 9
  • Parts 3
What happens when you die? Does anybody know? Is there no explanation? I got shot in the woods. I remembered a story my mother once told me and my mind went back to those happy memories, knowing I won't have any again. But I didn't die. I don't know what happened. I see strange people, Asian people who I don't know, doctors and nurses surround me. I'm not injured in any way. I have no idea where I am or any idea of where I could be. And why are they calling me Momoe? Is my name not Catherine? Why do I remember everything?
A Kidnapper's Dream (Unedited) by Prettylikeapoem
A Kidnapper's Dream (Unedited)
Prettylikeapoem
  • Reads 82,015
  • Votes 2,349
  • Parts 29
~A Kidnapper's Dream~ Once Upon A Time... There were no princesses or princes. There were no knights in shinning armor. There were no dragons to be slayed. There was a twenty-two-year-old woman named Jessalyn and it seemed like God hated her. When Jessalyn was little her parents mysteriously disappeared and a few years later she was almost murdered, but instead she was left disfigured. This was all because of the man who saved her that night, a man who left so quickly that she couldn't even see his face. Now, when Jessalyn is all grown up she's given up on everything in her life and she ends up being kidnapped. At first, Jessalyn thinks it's like Hell on Earth with her strange kidnapper, but slowly she starts to rethink it. Will Jessalyn let her emotions get the best of her? -Amazing cover by: @crazycherries Story takes places in the Victorian Era.-
Parting Ways by 1point618
Parting Ways
1point618
  • Reads 4,338
  • Votes 307
  • Parts 8
Emotional endings and painful goodbyes were never Emma Clayton's thing. When she finds out she is dying, goodbyes seem inevitable; the murderer, cancer, is slowly killing her and there is no way to stop it. Instead of becoming closer to the ones she loves, she finds herself pushing them farther away, afraid to show the ugly side of her dying can only bring out. She is ready to leave, ready to leave everyone she loves. She's set on parting ways... but there is one person who sees through her facade, someone who isn't ready to give her up... not yet.