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No Safe Haven by CodyMallonee
CodyMallonee
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Four names on an assassin's list. Three days before the New Year. Two complicated lovers. One solid lead. No Safe Haven. As William "Bishop" Dawkins consults on a series of homicides that seem to be connected only by the killer, he comes to realize that there is not only a connection between the victims, but between the killer and himself. As bodies pile up, Bishop does his best to stem the slaughter and get his revenge. Will Bishop put an end to this dark chapter arisen from his past? Or will he find that when chasing an assassin there truly is No Safe Haven? Cover art by my good friend Amy Fischlin
Errand Runners by Next_JK_Rowling
Next_JK_Rowling
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[Check out BOUNTY HUNTERS, the sequel to Errand Runners] Unlike the other criminals in Nova City, Nole Vale has a curfew. While most civilians just want to survive in their crime-ridden, gang-infested city, this sixteen-year old is determined to conquer the city streets and provide for his brother and sister by any means necessary. But after crashing into a mysterious teenager, Nole is suddenly accused of a crime he didn't commit and his stable way of life begins to crumble. With the help of a diverse, yet peculiar group of teenagers, he must navigate his way through lethal gangs, brutal City Enforcers, and a corrupt city system in order to clear his name and keep himself and his siblings alive. Cover by @sequester All rights reserved. All material in this book (Errand Runners), and everything on this account is, unless otherwise stated, the property of the owner, creator and author of this work (@Next_JK_Rowling). Copyright and other intellectual property laws protect these materials. Reproduction or retransmission, in whole or in part, or in any manner, without the prior written consent of the copyright holder is a violation of the Copyright, Patents and Design Act of 1988 law and is punishable by law.
A Kidnapper's Dream (Unedited) by Prettylikeapoem
Prettylikeapoem
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~A Kidnapper's Dream~ Once Upon A Time... There were no princesses or princes. There were no knights in shinning armor. There were no dragons to be slayed. There was a twenty-two-year-old woman named Jessalyn and it seemed like God hated her. When Jessalyn was little her parents mysteriously disappeared and a few years later she was almost murdered, but instead she was left disfigured. This was all because of the man who saved her that night, a man who left so quickly that she couldn't even see his face. Now, when Jessalyn is all grown up she's given up on everything in her life and she ends up being kidnapped. At first, Jessalyn thinks it's like Hell on Earth with her strange kidnapper, but slowly she starts to rethink it. Will Jessalyn let her emotions get the best of her? -Amazing cover by: @crazycherries Story takes places in the Victorian Era.-
Invisible by Harps14
Harps14
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Lea Jacobs' life changes with a decision that affects everyone she loves. How will she learn to cope with the reality of her fate? Will she be able to conquer the challenges that she is faced with and deal with the emotions that go along with it? "Invisible" is a story of love, tragedy and drama that leaves readers wondering, is there other realities beyond our own? Cover copyrighted by nirrimi All Rights Reserved .