[ My Immortal is one of the worst FanFictions to date and used to belong on the site FanFiction.net. The FanFic revolved around a gothic Mary Sue character with the most obscene name known to man. This gothic, My Chemical Romance wanna be vampire goes to Hogwards and meets Draco, the wizard of her dreams. However things get very fucking weird. ] I, SinfulWordMaster is going to dwell in the works of this really crappy writer and post everything and every chapter with my own commentation of certain things that go on in the scenes. However, things won't be a huge block of text; no matter how shitty grammar is, I don't do blocks of text even when doing this. I hope you guys hate this as much as I do. And please, do not flame this; I need to get the good reviews for more chapters and shit! Anyway. Enjoy this horrible recreation with commentary. I am not sorry.