Give me some advice!!

I need help making a story...I need all of you guys' help! Leave a comment for any suggestions! ^^

Otaku Issues

Most of these aren't mine, I got them from google lol I am no longer updating this book.

Soul Eater Power Down

When there is a power outage in Death City, everyone gathers at Maka and Soul's place for a sleepover. Note: this is an older version of the story. I'm in the process of rewriting it, please refer to my profile page to see the new book! It's under the same title, just with a "{Rewritten}" after. :-) Warning: Cringe x5...