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Rude Much? by xxsarcasticqueenxx
Rude Much?
xxsarcasticqueenxx
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Meet Claria Rodriguez the sweet, shy, Spanish captain of the U17 women's soccer team at her school in Miami. Despite the fact that she's the captain of soccer team she's not very popular and prefers to keep to herself. Then meet Jay McAllister the new British guy in town. He's mostly closed off and rude only uttering a single word a day. He's also Claria new neighbour. If you put these two together you're in for a world of trouble.
The War In His Mind by AndrewPurdum
The War In His Mind
AndrewPurdum
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After war devastated the United States, a survivor buried himself deep underground in a cryostasis chamber connected to a digital world- Wonder City. Dedicated to creating a perfect society, Thomas O'Neil transported his consciousness to the city and dedicated his life to creating a better world. But there's a major catch- everyone in the world is an exact clone of him without any emotions, passions, or original thoughts. Everyone is created through "The Code", a computer code designed to create people and assign jobs. For years it's worked flawlessly, filling Wonder City full of workers and civilians. The society was successful. Until one day when a glitch in the code created the first clone with emotions and thoughts- #937. Angry and determined to have free will, 937 sets out on a path to create a better world from the ashes of the old empire. What happens when the city of the future becomes a world that O'Neil can't contain? Welcome to Wonder City. Welcome to the future. **** Please keep in mind that this is a first draft. Many details, paragraphs, and chapters will inevitably change between this and the final version. There's still lots to be smoothed out. Thank you for understanding! I'm very open to suggestions! -Andrew Purdum
Don't judge by malearemele
Don't judge
malearemele
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you should never judge anyone on their looks because it doesn't matter what's on the outside what matters is on the inside
Because I'm a Nerd.  by kayra_malhotra
Because I'm a Nerd.
kayra_malhotra
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  • Parts 38
Meet Scarlett Woods; a girl different from no other, yet as rare as they come. She's a nerd, yes. She stutters, she's awkward and she'd rather not have more than one person talk to her at a time. Yet, she's badass, she knows when to grab an opportunity and is in no way weak like most nerds are inevitably thought to be. Enter Nathan Cullen; the new student, a nerd not unlike Scarlett and the owner of a smile that can send any girl's heart into overdrive. Nathan waltzes in Scarlett's life, changes everything for the better and mingles with her friends: Allie, Adrian, Evan, Emmett, Lauren and later on Ricky. But amongst the drama with Jonathan, a past chapter from Scarlett's life she'd rather not acknowledge, the continued attempts to keep up a normal façade, the insistent tries to develop a taste for strawberry ice-cream once more and failed efforts to reconcile with her parents, will Scarlett and Nathan be able to make it? Will they fall in love over long chats about Harry Potter and Twilight? Will Nathan's humorous outlook coupled with Scarlett's snarky jokes seal the deal? Will these two people, as alike as two peas in a pod come together only to crash and burn? Will the good girl/bad boy cliché be broken? Will they last long enough to make it? COMPLETED.