This is just a few paragraphs. I don't know if anyone would like it or not. Plus it just a start to see if I'm good at writing or not. Also I am a girl writing from a guy's view.

Mia Young, a 17 year old who really needs a job. Her father is drunk 24/7 and when he gets drunk he can get abusive. Not only does she have an abusive father, but she has to take care of her 6 year old brother, Joey. Then, one day, she gets hired as a personal maid. And that's when her life changes dramatically. Mia thought she could deal with anything. But as a personal maid? That's when things get over the definition of 'worse'.