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Before the First Mistake
At ninety-three years old, Elijah Carter dies a success.
A self-made billionaire.
A respected businessman.
A man whose name opened doors across the world.
But as he takes his final breath, one painful truth follows him into death:
He built an empire.
Yet he never built a family.
No wife.
No children.
No grandchildren.
No one sitting beside his bed when the end came.
Then he wakes up.
Not in his younger body.
Not in the past.
But inside the life of a complete stranger.
Marcus Hayes is a struggling police officer drowning in debt, frustration, and resentment. His marriage is hanging by a thread, and according to the memories Elijah inherits, tonight is the night everything begins to fall apart.
Tonight is the night Marcus raises his hand against his wife for the very first time.
The first mistake.
The first scar.
The beginning of a future filled with pain, regret, and a broken family.
Elijah refuses to let that happen.
Armed with a mysterious Family Legacy System and the billions he somehow carried over from his previous life, Elijah sets out to rewrite a future that was never his.
Instead of building corporations, he'll build trust.
Instead of chasing wealth, he'll chase happiness.
Instead of becoming a great businessman, he'll become a great husband.
And someday, a great father.
As he supports his wife's dream of opening her own bakery and slowly transforms a house filled with tension into a home filled with love, Elijah discovers that the greatest investment isn't money.
It's family.
Because this time, he isn't trying to leave behind a fortune.
He's trying to leave behind a legacy.
A heartwarming slice-of-life rebirth story about love, healing, second chances, fatherhood, and the family we choose to become.
Sometimes changing the future starts with avoiding one mistake.