Critique
12 stories
The Crimson Amulet (Original Version) (Wattys2015) by TanyaKaufman4121
The Crimson Amulet (Original Version) (Wattys2015)
TanyaKaufman4121
  • Reads 10,232
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  • Parts 51
Daniella Brochuete's world is turned upside down after she dreams of attending a ball. This would be a typical fairytale dream, if it weren't for the fact that a beautiful amulet she envisions in the dream, she ends up finding in real life. This amulet later leads her to be the target of manhunt as she tries to discover the dark truth about her family, and to locate her abducted loved one, before it is too late. Credit to @DarkAngelGal for helping me with the summary. :) Cover by @tribal-
Perfection [On hold - changing a lot of the story) by opulent_
Perfection [On hold - changing a lot of the story)
opulent_
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  • Parts 11
America has been divided into two factions, the cause being the inveterate compulsion that demands adequacy in all aspects of beauty: perfection. Two contrasting societies sectioned from each other, with one side completely altering themselves to achieve the aim their ardent desire for perfection is fuelling whilst the other loathes the very principle of it, preaching it as a wrong and sinful act formed by a lust for refinement. Fleur Huxley is bound by her societies distaste for perfection. Lessons taught in an attempt to restrict this forbidden desire have been to no avail as covertly, Fleur can't help but be entranced by it all. After America's annual Supremacy day - a ceremony in which an individual is whisked away to a life in the perfection division - Fleur's life takes a sudden turn into a world she isn't familiar with. With impending rebellions and a zeal for perfection inciting her actions, Fleur is slipped into a world of deceptive passion and ravishing beauty, a place in which dangerous secrets lie behind the most beautiful eyes. But Fleur is oblivious to it all, persistent in her hunt for perfection but as haunting realities threaten the world she is enthralled by, will Fleur finally realise there is a dark side to perfection? After all, in a passion-driven world built on deceit, how many sacrifices can you truly make on a quest for ultimate perfection? [ science-fiction #12 - 2/1/14 ]
Crazy House by Strawberry_Casey
Crazy House
Strawberry_Casey
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  • Parts 32
A medical student. A psychiatrist drop out. A con-artist. A stripper. Oh, and lets not forget the newest addition, me.. A run away.
The Silent's End [EDITING] by TheScarfacedGodson
The Silent's End [EDITING]
TheScarfacedGodson
  • Reads 2,776
  • Votes 123
  • Parts 12
The story follows a Senior Inspector named Ulrich F. Donner hoping to solve the mystery about a series of gruesome murders; How is it connected to Lorenz Vogt, a talented, renowned and brilliant virtuoso and how an unknown journal, as crypted messages were used as clues in solving the case. © 2013 TheScarfacedGodson All Rights Reserved.
Elementals: S1 E1 - The rise of the four powers by ElementalWriter
Elementals: S1 E1 - The rise of the four powers
ElementalWriter
  • Reads 27,453
  • Votes 1,627
  • Parts 18
The first episode of the first series of Elementals, a thrilling new fantasy story of four powerful beings and their journey into the world of magic. Please check out the 'Elemental' story first as it has a prologue and a bit about the characters to get you started. Just copy and paste this link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/7944493-elementals A magical collection of stories written as a tv series in story form for you guys to read. The time has come, the prophecy is about to be released on four ordinary people, four friends. Their bond as friends will soon strengthen as a new bond shall form, the Elemental bond. The signs are showing themselves and Chris, Alex, Talia and Lucy are going to have to accept their new powers as already they are being targeted. S1 E1
Stolen Kisses by storylover5555
Stolen Kisses
storylover5555
  • Reads 13,633
  • Votes 583
  • Parts 28
The biggest smiles hide the darkest secrets. This is the diary of Eliana's life, before it ended so abruptly. All because of one boy. NOT A FANFIC. Extract: "I should probably warn you now… if you’re expecting a conventional story, this isn't for you. It’s not a light hearted romance like a typical highschool love. So I’m not going to paint Henry as some knight in shining armor with perfect, glossy hair and a ‘Calvin Klein model’ body. I mean I was impartial to judgement, because I’d never seen his naked body. That was something we were going to have to fix. But in all honesty, my story is real. My story is my life." Copyright 2014 by storylover5555 All rights reserved.
Red Hooded • On Hold • by SarcasmIsMyLanguage
Red Hooded • On Hold •
SarcasmIsMyLanguage
  • Reads 11,135
  • Votes 465
  • Parts 7
I understood nature. I'd seen cruelty. I'd witnessed death and life. I knew of the beasts in the woods. I'd been loved. I'd loved. But, I'd never been in love... until I met him. This is how I fell in love with The Big Bad Wolf. ∞ This is a story about a common fairy tale with a twist of love and adventure. Hope you like it. ∞
The Host of My Heart (On Hiatus) by Samantha_G
The Host of My Heart (On Hiatus)
Samantha_G
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  • Votes 175
  • Parts 17
Host Club (noun): A type of business in Japan that resembles an escort service. However, the hosts are male, service is very expensive, and does not offer sex. Rather, it is more like paying an incredibly good looking guy to go on a date with you and flirt relentlessly. Kissing, cuddling, and holding hands may or may not be allowed depending on the club you go to. 25 year old Rika Diaz was fairly content to go to work, come home, eat, sleep and then do it all over again. But when her best friend of 20 years suddenly decides to sink her teeth into one of the most untouchable hosts in all of Japan, Rika is brought along for the ride. However, when Issen, arrogant and beautiful reveals to Rika that what she calls contentment is just an excuse to reject men before they reject her, will she finally open up her heart and let Issen help her, or will she continue to keep it under lock and key?
Give up the Dream, Dreamer by Thefallenpetal
Give up the Dream, Dreamer
Thefallenpetal
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  • Votes 30
  • Parts 1
Fading Stars by youthfulwriter
Fading Stars
youthfulwriter
  • Reads 6,622
  • Votes 381
  • Parts 9
When a drunken beggar opens up a new world of opportunities to Luke, he is thrust into a journey of elephantine consequence. Spurred on by a bunch of grouchy gnomes and an omen in the form of disappearing stars, Luke must decide between what he wants or the hopes and dreams of a mysterious girl he meets along the way. What happens when two ancient worlds threaten to collide, sending opposing civilisations into oblivion? The answer is in the stars.