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The Game Until 18 by TheRainbowPig
TheRainbowPig
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The rules to this game: 1. It lasts for six months, until I'm 18. 2. I still have to go to school, but it's a 'safe spot'. I can't be captured there. Other than that, the sky's the limit. 3. I have a budget of $300,000 on my credit card for traveling and food expenses. 4. The game ends the moment I turn 18 and three months old or if I get captured and held captive for 24 hours. 5. I can use any legal attempts to escape and my dad can use any legal attempts to capture me. Yes, that's right. You heard correctly in the last rule. My DAD. He tried to force me into an arranged marriage, and I refused, because that guy was just so damn snobby and conceited. Anyway, when I refused, my father proposed a game. If I could escape him for six months, until a little bit after my 18th birthday, then I was free to choose whom I wanted to marry. And so I accepted. GAME ON!! ~~●~~ © Copyrighted 2013 to TheRainbowPig. All rights reserved. No part of this document may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without prior written permission of TheRainbowPig. ~~●~~ Amazing cover by weeknder.
Model in Disguise by VVJohans
VVJohans
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“A pretty face can be the deadliest weapon.” A spy like her is a queen of disguises. This girl is someone who will outshine you even when she's down. Join her on a journey of beauty, love, secrets, and lies, as she tries to dodge every bullet thrown her way. Five girls, none can be trusted. Four agents, two gone missing. Two disguises, one too easy to miss. Her name is Rachel Harris, and she's the model in disguise.
A Genuine Infatuation and A Theorem for Love by surviving_heart952
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Linda has always been engrossed in her own world of books and a deep passion for studies. So much that it dwindled with her capacity to mingle amongst others - like any ordinary teenager would have committed to doing so. This worked worry into her parents' minds, though. Alexander and Eleanor put their heads together to form a solution to their daughter's peculiar conduct. *Marriage - they discover to be, a perfect resolution to it all.* Now, Linda has forever been an obedient and faithful daughter. Yet, this decision throws her off guard with her so-called fiancé wreaking havoc in her life. He's charming, alluring and a man after great a many skirts in the whole of Lancaster. Would Linda cope with her parents' wish for her betterment of a great future? Would she after-all marry the man destined to be hers? Or would she rather surprise us all, taking a turn to command her own fate? Read on and come into Linda's path on the brink of discovering the connotation of true love away from mere infatuation - a story you have never experienced afore. © 2013 by surviving_heart952. All rights reserved.