Hi I'm J. I have been writing for well over ten years and write novels for young adults (13-18). I will happily write a review of the first 3-4 chapters of your work in a constructive criticism style. I will not sugarcoat my feedback but I will suggest ways to help you improve. I am open to reading all genres but I will NOT read any stories where there are SEX scenes within the first 4 chapters.

If you want the votes, reads and comments without the reviews nor having to give reviews, this is the book club for you. Inspired by: LibraryPromotes Blue RoseBookclub and TheWritersClub which sadly has taken a break and hopefully would be back soon. Cover by: celestiallyme #1 in Synergy (09/2020 - 09/2021)

"With all due respect sir, adding a new member to this team will only slow us down." "On the contrary, if anything your team will slow her down." *** She's the ghost story you tell around a camp fire. The monster that hides in your closet. The nightmare that wakes you from your sleep. She's the definition of the word 'deadly'. She never smiles, never shows any emotion other than a blank stare. Unless, she's pissed, then it shows. She doesn't trust any of the other agents, only the chief. She doesn't play nice with others. She's a solo agent, always works alone, but that's about to change. Respect her and she'll take a bullet for you. Mistreat her and she'll put a bullet in you...if you're lucky. She's Agent 13... ***Book 1*** Highest Ranking: #1 in Action

College AU ~~~ Getting into College is difficult. Add in the fact it's the most prestigious hero academy in the whole world and you've got yourself quite the journey ahead. You weren't magical or super badass, you weren't a god nor a super genius. But apparently you were determined enough to be allowed in. This is where your story begins. ~~~ Characters belong to Marvel, Disney and Stan Lee

🚨[HEAVY EDITING (editing on hold)]🚨 DISCLAIMER! This story was made in 2020 so any information about future Marvel works will be as if the reader is still from 2020! (Heavy cringe warning too, sorry y'all) ‼️ALSO CHANGING FROM FEM TO GENDER NEUTRAL‼️ ~~~ Y/n seems to go to sleep as usual, that is until a weird blue mist appears in her room. Grabbing her phone for light her curiosity gets the better of her as she touches the mist getting transported into the MCU. ~~~ ALL CHARACTERS BELONG TO MARVEL AND DISNEY AND Y/N BELONGS TO YOU #2 - marvelau 20/4/20 #8 - lokilaufeyson 6/5/20 #1 - avengers 4/5/20 #1 - lokixreader 6/5/20 #2 - loki 18/5/20

Centuries being left alone and exploited left Y/n feeling cold hearted and empty. After being recruited by the Avengers she felt some pride, finally at home. And she was determined to break down the Trickster God's icy facade she knew all too well. ~~~ All characters belong to MARVEL, Stan Lee and Disney Y/n belongs to you The plot belongs to me

Scared by a traumatic past Sahara’s damaged life becomes blissful when she finally discovers her mate. Overjoyed with finding her savour Sahara cannot help but let her guard down. But what happens when her mate is repulsed with what she is, of how weak she is compared to his powerful presence. Undeserving of him, her life returns back to what it was of the past. Imprisoned. **** Extract ***** My moist eyes stay downcast, like when facing royalty. I must show respect, only the deserving are allowed to look into his cold black eyes. Although I follow his rules his grip tightens cutting off what little circulation I had. I must not show my agony either. It will only make this all the more harrowing. I slam against his chest as he closes the space between us, his threatening body towering over my fragile frame. I know what's next, it's unpreventable, unavoidable. His manly nose runs along my jaw and into the crook of my neck. I'm unable hold back the tears that stream down my raw face. Hopefully they dry before he sees them. Opened mouth kisses coat my neck, causing my stomach to tighten in dread. This is only the beginning, the starter of the meal. Like he's voiced before, 'he likes to savour the taste'. The kisses stop momentarily as his warm breath covers my ear. "Good evening Princess, did you miss me?" he lures. **Contains sexual scenes, bad language and mild scenes of abuse**

Elle & Ethan's Story. This is part of a series but can be read as a standalone. Expected publication 2016

Riley & Ashley's story (#243 in ChickLit) When people say the word Bad Boy I always have a tidal wave of emotions that wash over me. First there's loathing. I loath how visual their false traps are. The traps that ensnare innocents but the girl never knows any better, doesn't realise she's being hunted. Next comes hate. I hate the outcome. The girl is no longer innocent but broken, a former shell of what she once was. Lastly it's fear. The fear of being that girl. Fear of being blind sided into one of those death clasping traps and coming out on the other side as someone else. Fear of being someone I don't recognise. When people say the word Bad Boy I always have a tidal wave of emotions that wash over me, but there is only one that takes centre stage - Fear. Part of a series but can be read as a standalone. Expected December 2015 **Contains strong language and sexual scenes**

( #249 ChickLit ) Sometimes, a mistake is all it takes... Shy girl Molly and bad boy Ren live in two separate worlds. She lives precariously, avoiding mistakes that haunt her past, while he flaunts the rules and lives on the edge. What happens when a bet causes their worlds to collide? Can Molly let go of her fears one by one and accept Ren, or will her past fears repeat themselves again? And will Ren live up to the bet or will he realize there's more to Molly than he thinks? Part of a series but can be read as a standalone. **Contains strong language, violence and sexual scenes** PG13 rating not mature **Not completed, still updating regularly.** Awards & Reviews Achieved: July's 'Discover the undiscovered' Awards - 1st place Golden Raspberry Award (The Most Original Story) - 1st Place Wattpad Spotlight awards -2nd place Undiscovered Gems Competition -2nd palace Golden Raspberry Award - Beauty and the beast category - 3rd place Review by Oznapitsbizzle: Rated 94% Review by omaraguirre: Rated 7.6 / 10