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She Was Broken Beyond Repair by Praggya_Sabarwal
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[COMPLETED] [Hightest Ranking #3, From 3rd to 6th September 2016] She was an epitome of strength, though afraid of people leaving her, she built walls around her to prevent the hurt and misery. Hiding her true VULNERABLE SELF from the world, excluding her close one's. Until HE came and read right past her BROKEN SOUL. A miraculous ray of silver lining that proved to be her unimaginable doom. HE was every girl's dream. Got anything he desired for in a click! An absolute jerk, being inconsiderate towards people's feelings. Until he met HER. She changed him for good, unknowingly working her natural charm. Gradually the love blossomed between the two, their world revolving around each other's existence. Happiness was short lived as her truth re-surfaced, this is when HE BROKE HER BEYOND REPAIR. Follow these two on a roller coaster packed with hurt, betrayal, love, and dilemma. P.S. This is my first story. Please give it a tryy:))) Cover By: jan1810 Started: 18th March 2016 Completed: 27th June 2016 I DO NOT OWN ANY PICTURES DISPLAYED THEY RIGHTFULLY BELONG TO THEIR OWNER DO NOT COPY MY WORK OR THE TITLE IN ANY FORM YOU WILL BE REPORTED IMMEDIATELY! Errors to be corrected later
The Numbered by bnlfan
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Imagine the second you're born, a consultant removes you from your mother's grasp and runs a battery of genetic and physiological tests on you. Thirty minutes later they give you a score out of one hundred which denotes your level of perfection. If your score is above eighty and you work hard to maintain that score you will have a charmed life; well fed, well-rewarded, spoiled. But fall below eighty and you're labelled Flawed, and life will not be so kind. Hannah is adopted by a Flawed family when her birth parents choose their social standing over their daughter and endures a life of struggle, hunger and service. One day Hannah is escorted to the regional government office and told that the Consultant who delivered her, who labelled her Flawed got it wrong! Now, she is being relocated back to her birth parents, to live as one of the Ninety-Five- all medically and legally judged as perfect. Entering this new life Hannah has an impossible decision to make which puts not only hers, but the lives of everyone she cares about at great risk. "The Numbered- where no one wants to be number one". Authors notes: -This is a first draft of my story and will be edited soon. -2013 Began writing Flawed -2015 Watty Winner/ Named changed to The Numbered -2016 Completed The Numbered -2019 Optioned by eOne for development into a TV show.