Sixteen year old Naito Raizu never got to see his mother before she passed away. Her dying wish was for him to fulfill his destiny as king of the Zodiac Empire. With a destiny on his shoulders that only he can fulfill, Naito will do anything to make his mother proud. But it's far easier said than done. Only three hours passed after his unsettling coronation before he met a mysterious girl named Mary. It didn't take him long to find out that she's a wizard, a Pyromancer, despite not being a member of his empire. Through their many encounters, Naito is only certain on one thing about her - she won't rest until he's six feet underground. Edited by @Callmeshameless Shoutout to @Netshaly for the cover.

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