its only a start so I hope that you can give me criticism and some ideas for the next part.

Getting off the train you were expecting to be staying with your aunt for the summer but then you come to realize that summer turned to your life when your mother gave her the custody of you... Older! Lazytown teens and stuff

*CHRISTMAS SPECIAL* One clear night, Collin wishes upon a shooting star... and now he's trapped in the world of Minecraft. With no knowledge on getting out, he and his friend must survive the hazardous, blocky terrain while not being killed by countless of aggressive mobs. Together, they must work together to locate the End portal and defeat the Enderdragon. The only problem is, this isn't just a game anymore.

I'm so sorry this is really cringey