Hi this is my first story please give me constructive criticism. Athena the main character. She was raised to be a monster hunter at a very young age, but sadly her parents had been assassined when Athena was only 10 and after she trained very hard. She was then sent to kill a monster but she couldn't and the monster became her family. one day she finds a boy her age unconscious, and brings him to her home. If you want to find out more then u better read the story :3 ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!