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Tethered Twins by Blagman
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A world filled with twins, tethered together in life and in death. When Emmie Keyes lives through every agonising moment of her brother's death she knows with certainty that her life is over. In her broken world everyone is born with a twin, that they share a psychic link with from birth, and when their twin dies their life ends too. Yet despite knowing that her death is imminent she mysteriously cheats fate and survives. Devastated by the loss of her brother and unsure why she was spared, Emmie sets out to discover the truth. She enlists the help of her best friend to help her track down the most powerful man in the world with one goal in mind; finding the truth. In this action packed debut novel that is adrenaline soaked from the very first page you will uncover the truth behind the Tethers that bind Emmie's world with shocking revelations and mind bending twists along the way. The complete story is now live! As sold on Amazon for full price, you can get the entire book for free right here on Wattpad. Enjoy! P.S The book currently doesn't have an agent or a publisher so if you're interested drop me an email on mike (at) blagman (dot) co (dot) uk.
Fighting the Losing Battle by MayAsWellBeStrangers
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There was a time when my people were everywhere. That time has passed. Now they're all gone. All of them, dead. Except me. Now I'm alone. The last of my kind. And I'm being hunted.
Elle and the Electric by MythicalPublish
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{ This is the first book in the 'E L L E' series. } Elle is psychic. At least, that's what she thinks she is. She can read her family's minds easily, and on occasion she can predict the future through dreams. Aaron is fast. He knows it. He's been practicing for years, and just recently he'd been titled the fastest teen in the world. She's the brains; he's the brawn. All they want to do is save the world. { Link to second book : http://w.tt/1Kl61AK }
The Five by Snow-Bound-
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In a chaotic world where there was once peace, but now insurmountable evil where may one find a peace of mind? Well if you look hard enough, just past a town named Victoria, you will find a house carved into a tree with six unusual friends. There they live from day to day waiting for a job to come in and a journey to be made. There you may find some unlikely, maybe even mysterious, heroes in these troubled times. May the Great Goddess bless their journey and yours as you travel through odd and magical worlds beyond our own. Take a jump and read about these people.
Bad Dreams {DRAFT} by yourstrulymadison
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Jackie Hallaway is a caring girl, full of love and is always happy. She's always there for people when they need a shoulder to cry on. She was even rated Nicest Person in 8th grade. But all that changed for Jacqui when she came home one night after her little cousins 9th birthday party. Jacqui started having nightmares that no medication or doctors appointments would help. But Jacqui successfully ignored them. Although what she didn't know was that each nightmare she had was sending fatal signals to the Government Control Room. No one but someone she used to be really close to, who ended up working with his/her dad in the Control Room, knew of what was happening. Will this special person save Jacqui? A work of fiction full of action, adventure, and romance. Copyrighted . yourstrulymadison All right reserved . 2015 Cover: mrs_mikitahoran *WARNING* NO MAJOR EDITING WILL TAKE PLACE UNTIL AFTER THE BOOK IS COMPLETED. PLEASE EXCUSE SPELLING ERRORS AND GRAMMAR.
The Hero Inside of Me by Zami1222
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What do you do when everything that you thought you knew about yourself-was only the beginning? What happens when you're forced to give up normality to be something else? Follow along as four teenagers make their way through their new discoveries about who- and what- they are, in a time when humankind needs them the most. This is my first wattpad story so I hope you like it. Special thanks to ASecret928 for the amazing cover art. Also, feel free to let me know what you guys think and want in the comments, and I'll see if I can incorporate your ideas into the story.
Redemption by merlinforever22766
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"The time for answers is not now," she said. "The time to break has just begun." Avery Rider, a fifteen-year old girl, lives in a society in future dystopian America. The society is built on fear itself. She attends the Academy, in which the society occupies children until they are too broken and dull to really understand the troubles in the world. Avery was never broken, never hurt. This enables her to be selected. She becomes a candidate to join a rebellion and leaves the Academy behind forever when certain events take over. The rebellion plans to overthrow the society and break loose once and for all. Book 1 of the Condemnation Trilogy WattyAwards2015
How to Hide a Heart [#JustWriteIt] by Jay_Rozey225
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Childhood friends Talia and Issac are impossible to separate. They do EVERYTHING together despite having to do it in secrecy due to Issac's family unwillingness to accept Talia's oriental heritage. Years pass as they come of age and feel new feelings for each other hidden for so many years....
Remember Me by hotchocoIate
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"Did you just quote Mean Girls?" Noah asks, tilting an eyebrow. I smirk, passing over his coffee. "Did you just admit to watching Mean Girls?" Auden Baker thought that college would sail by swiftly and silently. When she arrived into her empty dorm room, it was perfect. The calm before the storm. Then Noah Dillon walked in. Arrogant, undeniably cute and terribly stubborn just like Auden. Things could still go right, yeah? I mean, there weren't really any problems. Except for the fact that she might be slowly falling in love with him. And that they declared a joking war. [cover made by yours truly]
Since Then by Smartdazzle
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.:Teen Romance Fiction:. Amber Hollen was just a ordinary 14 year old girl, on her way to home on a school bus, gets into a tragic bus accident that leads her in coma for 2 years. When she woke up, as a 16 year old, a boy was there telling her that everything's gonna be okay and left. Amber wants to find the boy to say thanks, but little did she know that the boy is her classmate. But wait! Amber has more important things on her mind besides that mystery boy. She reunites with her mother (Who's still the same loving mother she knew before the accident), and her best friend in the whole wide world, Cori, has changed due to the accident of her best friend. Will Amber be able to adjust to her changes? Would she even try to fix it? Will Amber find that "mystery" boy? **On Hold**