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The Five Before the Wolves by FVKdeadicated
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In a world ruled by a cruel vampire leader, five men embrace their destinies. Together they become the Fearless Vampire Killers and attempt to triumph over the evil reign of the vampire King. Each follow a different path which leads them to their future together as friends. With the assistance of mysterious and unique beings their fate becomes clear that they are to free the world from this unjust monarch.
Her Dead Stalker by Dark_Reality
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“Do it, rose!” He encouraged me as I stood in between all the spirits, the evil, the good and the dead. The only light that was present in the dark and horror graveyard was from the dark book in my hands and the moon. I could hear the wolfs howling and the dogs barking but today was the day, I was going to end it all. “I will” I nodded at my dead lover as I started tearing each page of that book, slowly and painfully taking the life of them all. Hearing their screams and shouts made me happy. It was finally ended but still one was left and that was he. Taking small steps towards him, I dropped the book from my hand, landing with a thud on the ground. He backed away as I reached him. His eyes showed fear and dread for me, my poor lover did not wanted to be dead again.
Elementals: S1 E1 - The rise of the four powers by ElementalWriter
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The first episode of the first series of Elementals, a thrilling new fantasy story of four powerful beings and their journey into the world of magic. Please check out the 'Elemental' story first as it has a prologue and a bit about the characters to get you started. Just copy and paste this link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/7944493-elementals A magical collection of stories written as a tv series in story form for you guys to read. The time has come, the prophecy is about to be released on four ordinary people, four friends. Their bond as friends will soon strengthen as a new bond shall form, the Elemental bond. The signs are showing themselves and Chris, Alex, Talia and Lucy are going to have to accept their new powers as already they are being targeted. S1 E1