This is a review of the story As Delicate as a Rose by @friendme123456789 (which btw is a pretty cringey username). The review is meant purely for comedy and hopefully for the writer to get better at writing. This is in no way shape or from meant to "bully" or harass the writer

Kyle never really was paid attention to in school, or in the world all together. in an attempt to become known he built the ARK which was an unlimited power source. he kept this to himself, but the military still found its way to it. With not the right knowledge, kyle is brought in to aid them in all their equipment needed, but will he ve distracted by Rose (the gemerals daughter) or by parker...