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The Time Leapers by ashhhely
The Time Leapers
ashhhely
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  • Parts 26
Revy's just a prep school student, living with her brother Jacob. All she wants is a normal life, and she's this close to achieving it. Her plans are shattered when her supposed-to-be-dead best friend, Arya shows up telling her a story so insane she can't help but believe it. She meets the guarded and intriguing Move, who shows her the layers of the world. Arya and Move guide her and introduce her to the world of time leapers, people who time travel to save a dying world. As she sees more, Revy begins to love and cherish her own world. After a sudden turn of events, Revy now fights for a world she once considered nothing. She now fights for humanity against humanity's subconscious itself.
Nebula by SilverGalaxySkies
Nebula
SilverGalaxySkies
  • Reads 739
  • Votes 67
  • Parts 12
--This is a collection of short stories about and by the Captain of the Presley Jackson-- A NOTE TO READERS: To avoid 'confusion' to some - each story is separated into PARTS meaning that they shouldn't be treated individually but instead as one. So if you want to leave a comment then please consider both parts and the content within before doing so. Thank you very much for actually reading as I know you want a summary which is below :) "What do you suppose a 'home' is? A place which you live in? Four walls that protect you from all sorts of damage and destruction from the outside? A planet, maybe? Well my home was never anything like that. It wasn't something you simply went inside with a knock or two. It wasn't some place you could drive to in a car or fly to in a ship. I wasn't normal enough for something as mundane as that. My home is in probably the strangest of places. The galaxy. Billions upon billions of solar systems and phenomenon of epic proportions that one can look at by just looking up. That's where you'll find me. That's where I belong." --Expect intergalactic adventures, mystery and space in every part. Each being a full short story telling the life and times of the captain from her point of view-- ((Shoutouts are dumb and I don't usually do them but in this case AnimalLuver39 deserves one for the awesome cover. That is all.))