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Forbidden Tales by glamcinnamon
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Listen to the tales that are since forbidden. Written in these pages are no longer hidden. Enter the magical world of fairy-tales with a twist. Highest Rank: 28 (Starting 4/18/2017) © 2017 by Princess Angel Ventures (glamcinnamon). All rights reserved.
The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
Anna (ON HIATUS) by parrisgirl958
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Alyssa Marks can't seem to let go. Warning: I wrote this when I was 13/14 and have done minimal editing since then, but that doesn't mean you should hold back any constructive criticism to spare my feelings. Fire away:) Also, I am currently rewriting this. In all honesty, this is rewritten draft #4 of the story and am planning on posting the final draft (yes that would be the 5th version of this story) by the end of July 2018. This book is very personal to me and parallels my own dealings with grief. I just want it to be as close to perfect as possible.