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Die Now or Live Forever by nomsomart
nomsomart
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At the age of 18, each member of society must choose their fate: Die now, or live forever? Dying at the moment you choose seems pretty rough, so most would choose to live forever. Aaron Williams is a completely normal teen, but he is uncertain about the Ceremony of Fate. Will he choose to die at the moment he says "Die now", or ready to never die, and speak the words "Live forever"?
The Dead Life by TAHernandez5
TAHernandez5
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Ruben Vasquez is an experienced homicide detective with a fervent dedication to solving even the most difficult crimes. There's just one problem: he's dead. In an alternate version of our world, the spirits of the dead have become visible to everyone, walking among the living until they pass on to whatever existence lies beyond this life. In most cases, that makes Ruben's job easier than ever before since victims are often able to provide answers in their own murder investigations. But when a body is found and all immediate signs point to suicide, Ruben isn't convinced, and the dead woman's ghost isn't around for him to question. With nothing but a hunch to go on, he sets out to find answers. But is there really something sinister going on, or is Ruben just desperate to find meaning in his seemingly endless dead life?
Reparations by TAHernandez5
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The scars of war can never be erased... Amaya is an enchantress in a world where magic is heavily restricted. After a brutal civil war tears her country apart, she must come to terms with everything that has happened and find a way to face her past.