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Shattered Angel by GabbyCannariato
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"Adam!?" I exclaimed. That was the start of the most terrifying night Annie ever experienced. It was the night she came home, to see the still and not breathing body of her boyfriend. That night was supposed to be their anniversary.. But, instead it was nothing but a miserable event. Adam was the only one who ever understood Annie. He listened. He laughed. He loved.. He loved her and only her. And now he was just gone from her life. And she was determined from that night, to find out who had done it. Who had done something, so terrible to her amazingly famous boyfriend.. Was it for money? Revenge? Jealousy? Rage? She was going to figure out who did it.. And most definitely why? Because, she loved Adam deeply to the core. Whether or not, it was an important phase in her life.. She began noticing someone certain when she was off walking to work. Someone.. She had never seen before. "Well for your information my name is Danny. And you lovely mysterious lady would be?" He said sarcastically, but with a gentle tone. The night she lost her boyfriend to murder. And the day she lost herself to one more sick love.. But the only mystery in this story is.. Did Love And Happiness Win Over The Murder And Blood?
Love of my Life - ON HOLD - by GabbyCannariato
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Blaine was your average teenage gay boy. He went to Dalton, a no tolerance for bullying school, and in fact he was in their Glee club. A singing group, in which he was most of the time leading. What happens though, once Kurt Hummel come to the school? Blaine will have so many different emotions, just as Kurt will. But.. Four questions will still remain for their little relationship; Is Kurt really gay? Does Kurt love Blaine as much as Blaine loves him? How will this effect their life? And. What obstacles will they both have to face in it? Blaine and Kurt get to know eachother and figure it out together. But, will Blaine impress Kurt? Or will he have to move on, to find that Kurt isn't gay, or just isn't interested? Author's Quick Note~ No I'm not completely into the idea, of people being gay. It's still awkward to me and all.. But, when I found out in Glee Kurt and Blaine broke up on the episode.. That all the Klaine was over. It was just so disappointing.. I mean, they could get back together and Kurt could forgive Blaine. But, I just don't want to have to wait. So, I just decided to make my own personal story on the whole Klaine love story relationship.. Even though, I honestly have no clue what would really happen. Cause, it's not like I'm the actors or the writers of this show. I just can't imagine them not being together. Just as much, as some other fans can't either. Half of this, storyline isn't even true! So.. Don't bother believing that Blaine was bullied, or that he looked terrible in High School. In fact.. I think I got names wrong, and yes I did it on purpose because, I am a very forgetful person. But, most of the characters I got right.. I think? Sebastian was right, Kurt was OBVIOUSLY right.. Maybe, Jason and pretty much the other MADE UP characters..
My Bloody Valentine by Ashy17
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Ashley Night, a girl used to living a luxurious lifestyle is recently enrolled into a reform school for troubled teenagers after a tragic fire at her family home.She finds herself struggling to let go of her traumatic past that maliciously taunts her in the form of night terrors while also having to deal with a suicidal brother and a pressurizing mother, she meets a mysteriously charming bad boy with a dark secret that threatens Ashley's sanity; her whole life changes...and his ruthless game of obsession begins. Will Ashley be able to cope with all the changes or will she inevitably give in to her demons?
Begin Again by ashleigh_dagger
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'I will always protect you even if I don't know what from.' Ashleigh has been hurt badly before and is still learning to trust and love again. A holiday to Spain with her two best friends is exactly what she needs. Until she meets a guy who flips her world upside down. Ashleigh begins to find herself falling all over again but can she lower her walls enough to let Zayn in. And when the past threatens to reappear will Ashleigh have the courage to pursue a new relationship?
Beautiful Shadows by Drowning_Romantic23
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Cleo Maykis was just a normal 15 year old witch living in the small town of Fayshore. When things become strange, she has to face more problems than most other "normal" teenage girls. With the help of 2 mischievous twins and her best friend Isis, she discovers powers that she never thought possible. But the question is, will the shadows be her friend, or foe?
Elementals: S1 E1 - The rise of the four powers by ElementalWriter
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The first episode of the first series of Elementals, a thrilling new fantasy story of four powerful beings and their journey into the world of magic. Please check out the 'Elemental' story first as it has a prologue and a bit about the characters to get you started. Just copy and paste this link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/7944493-elementals A magical collection of stories written as a tv series in story form for you guys to read. The time has come, the prophecy is about to be released on four ordinary people, four friends. Their bond as friends will soon strengthen as a new bond shall form, the Elemental bond. The signs are showing themselves and Chris, Alex, Talia and Lucy are going to have to accept their new powers as already they are being targeted. S1 E1
DONT READ! BEING RE-WRITTEN || That Night: Harry Styles Fanfiction by kdesousa
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Young Charlie Munro Anderson has a lot of bad in her life. It all starts from her fathers passing; a tragic death that she witnessed as a child. Since, she hasn't been too keen on relationships with anyone until a certain Dean Harrison joins the picture. Dean comes into Charlie's life carrying baggage of his own. From his past, his friends, even her new step-sisters and a couple of fights. Will Dean's history come to haunt Charlie, or will they relate and grow stronger? And what happens when two other young men get Charlie's attention? Special thank you to the character base; Erica,, Marisa, Steven, Luke, Harry, and last but not least Carine. another thank you to Nicole, i wouldn't have had the enthusiasm to continue if you didn't show so much support. Enjoy.
Athenia's Choice (ON HOLD) by starz00
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Something mysterious happened in 1838... Athenia Reynalds, a 14 year old minx is fed up with her strict parents and dull life. She longs for excitement and adventure... She will make many choices along her quest to find happiness - but will she realise when things are not quite as they seem? Full of suspense, love, heartbreak, adventure, passion, secrets and a very daring girl... © Athenia's Choice Copyright starz00
Mongrel  by sierra131
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Mongrel the troubled orphan, is half wolf and half something else. No one can put a paw on his mysterious origins. As the outcast of the pack due to his physical differences, finding happiness and fitting in has become a daily struggle. Seen as nothing more than a freak, he is treated indifferently to the rest of the pack by their leader and everyone a part of it. Everything changes when strange powers and the occasional lust for bloodshed become apparent. It soon comes to light that Mongrel is definitely not just an outcast, but a creature born with a great purpose and incredible strength both on the outside and in. Only he, is capable of saving the greater pack and possibly, his entire kind from a powerful threat no one could have thought to foresee. Full of action, twists, and a hint of romance, Mongrel is a story your sure to love. *NOT A WEREWOLF STORY*