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Star Wars episode VII: The Force Awakens rewrite by AnimalX23
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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away... my first-ever STAR WARS rewrite. for I will be rewriting Disney's Star Wars sequel trilogy (Force Awakens, Last Jedi, Rise of Skywalker) fixing the many, MANY problems those three films had (such as the conflicting visions of two directors for example). starting this series is my rewrite of the force awakens, which will fix some of the problems of that film such as it being a re-hash of a new hope with not much new to bring to the table. how do I fix it? read it to find out!
Hayley Taylor by BenStryker
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Dystopian Earth. Set in the early 2060s, so not too far into the future. Due to the overpopulation of Earth and due to the virus that lingered in the air, the Elites left the world in starships leaving behind the Mid-Landers and Grounders to fend for themselves. Some strange monoliths appeared on Earth landscapes. They were capable of intergalactic travel as people walked through them. The real story is Hayley Taylor being raised by her father. Due to the Senate's strict rules about controlling the overpopulation of Earth, they enacted laws requiring people to take birth control. Because Hayley was conceived by two unmarried people without permission and because of her mother's status as a Grounder, Hayley could be taken away and lost within the system. However, Hayley's father decided to take her due to his Midlander status and the fact that his sister is an Elite. Hayley will grow up to become strong. Due to her genetic mutation that caused her hair to be white and her eyes yellow, she will struggle. Under her father's care, she will endure and eventually overcome obstacles, but her world. Her future and the unknown awaits her.