hello if you like what you please tell tell tho I really doubt you will I've never written any story in my life but i don't really care if you don't like it im doing this for fun but will have a more experienced friend help me you can bet all the good stuff is from them . and yes I know my writing skills suck but if nothing else I thought i would at least get so.e constructive criticism so here it is. this story is mainly about a girl named rose and boy named Sebastian and the girls best friend minho and they get sucked into my own wonderful wonderland going through whatever advangers me and my friend put them on If you see it and decide you really hate it Express that hate with some constructive criticism so I may get better