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The Chosen One  by isaak_zack
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A young girl awakens a cult and is hunted by them as she unravels the truth about her long lost sister.
Crossing the Silver Thorns by Quillworks
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[First in Genre, Action/Adventure - The Shadow Awards] [Best Heartbreaker - The Shadow Awards] Alema (aw-leh-may) is the dominant male of a small African wild dog pack, dedicating every day of his life towards his family. He has remained blissfully unaware of the world outside the secluded wildlife reserve his pack calls home, and makes an effort to avoid the barbed wire barrier that separates the two lands. But there are bigger problems under way. Poachers have broken into the reserve, and Alema's mate and pups become victims of their trade. At a loss without his family, Alema must travel to the strange and unfamiliar Outside World to reclaim them. No longer protected within the conservation veldt, Alema is faced with a world overtaken by the upwalkers. A world where animals are killed for parts and dogs are forced to fight against one another in the streets. Beyond his knowledge, Alema has treaded upon one of the most high-profile illegal wildlife trade cases in all of Africa--and he is stuck in the middle of it all. Age Range: Children's Fiction [12+] (though open to all age groups) Rankings: #317 in Adventure (12/29/17) #194 in Adventure (1/1/18) #177 in Adventure (1/12/18) [Quarter-Finalist of the X-Factor Awards] PLACEMENT COVER ART: LionsDen (will be changed) Updates every other Sunday and Wednesday (Next update: Sunday, February 18th)
Amateur poems  by asb0512
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'I walk alone with bruises and scars, some over my body and some inside of me' TRIGGER ALERT!! Do not read if you get easily disturbed with topics like racism, rape, depression, sucide and death.. *Winner of Equestrian awards!! *2nd place in the BLOOMING AUTHORS awards
I am the bad boy by Thecoldboringguy157
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Ryan Ashton is the bad boy of the school and talk of the town, he could have any girl he wants until one day a new girl comes to school and he falls madly in love but she doesn't accepts him for who he is. Will he mend his ways and catch the heart of this girl or will he walk away and find a new one to follow?
He Stole Her Knight  by Fathi_zee
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Katherine Velea, a normal girl who works day and night to support herself and her mother who is a cancer patient fighting for her life. Katherina never has time for a love life but all changes when she meets Nancy's (the old lady that she works for) nephew Tyler James. Tyler is the devil himself, gorgeous, trouble and broken. Katherina finds herself attracted to the devil and knows things will go wrong. But the devil is not the only one with secrects....
It was a War, Bea by CarolinaC
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In the early 1920s, Beatrice wonders why her crush, a veteran of the Great War, does not always seem to return her affections.
The Girl in the Hooded Jacket by wildflowerszz
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There we stood, hand in hand, facing the mirror. I looked at myself, my brown hair disheveled and my eyes hollow. My skin was so pale that I looked almost ghostly, and bruises scattered my face. I resembled everything I didn't want to be: fearful, hurt, empty. Then I looked at her. Her cheeks were flushed red with excitement, and her blue eyes were glowing with energy. That was what I wanted to be. Excited, energetic, happy. And at that moment, I made a decision. "Let's run away together."
The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
A lady's hand by Thecoldboringguy157
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Two men and a woman unknown to rest of the world shares two nights together that changes their lives one by one. Follow them as a thread of misfortune unravels before them. Thank you all to my supporters and readers who helped me with 1K reads, it is an honor. The wonderful cover made by @Claire-the-bookworm
Open your Eyes by MordecaiTheElite
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A few days after the events of the simulation of Talos I, the Typhon hybrid tries to adjust to its surroundings, as well as its mental state.