This is a short poem I wrote and my first one im posting so give me feedback and suggestions~

You used to love me, but when you see someone else, you chase her like crazy. [07-08-17: #2 for Poetry] [From 06-28-16 to 04-20-17] Featured in @WP_Poetry's Reading List

❝i've delicately chosen letters to form words and words to form sentences, each sentence a colorful paint stroke on the canvas of my mind.❞ [ #1 in poetry on 27/08/16 ]